[fic: white collar] Enemies

[frith_in_thorns]

Title: Enemies
Characters/Pairing: Mozzie, Neal, Peter; Gen
Rating: T
Word count: 5000
Content Notes: Non-consensual drug use, depictions of anxiety and paranoia
Other Notes: This fills the "tyranny/rebellion" square of my hc_bingo card, which is the LAST square. Now I have achieved a blackout and will never need to write hurt/comfort again! Totally

Comments

[caseyf123]

That was heartbreaking seeing Neal so lost and afraid. Glad Mozzie had the sense to call Peter. Nice job.

[frith_in_thorns]

Thank you so much! :)

[kanarek13]

D'awwwww ♥ What an amazing way to complete the HC bingo \o/ Absolutely perfect story from beginning to end :D Heee :D

You have Mozzie's voice down to perfection, even though the situation was angsty, I just kept smiling and nodding at everything he did and said, lol... I love any form of Neal!whump but I think the key brilliance in this story is the Peter and Mozzie interaction :D :D

And how lovely is the final scene? Neal sleeping peacefully and clutching Peter's hand, d'awwww. Yes and yes and yes :D \o/

Congrats again on achieving the blackout \o/ So, when is the next round? (*hides* :P)

[frith_in_thorns]

Awwww, thank you so much! :D I'm also really happy that you were amused by this fic, as that was definitely what I was aiming for. Actually when I started writing I expected that it was just going to be a Neal&Mozzie fic, but then Peter crept in there and I just had so much fun writing him and Mozzie bickering!

I am very addicted to writing Neal clinging on to Peter. It is the cutest image to think about :D

And yay, blackout!! :D Just in time for new cards in June... I'm probably never going for a blackout again, but I wanted to have done it once :)

[sallymn]

Oh I loved this! Poor Neal does drugged and afraid so well, and I love the trust he still has in both Peter and Mozzie, and his addled worry for Peter.

And the two of them work so well together when it's for Neal, which is beautiful...

Thank you for a great way to wake up in the morning!

[frith_in_thorns]

Thank you so much! Peter and Mozzie as reluctant(ish) allies are just so incredibly fun to write. As is drugged!Neal, of course!

[ladyrose42]

great descriptions of mozzie's safe house and all his precautions. And the over the top paranoia at the end to help ground Neal

[frith_in_thorns]

Thank you very much! I'm usually quite unsure of my ability to write Mozzie, so I'm really glad you enjoyed him here :)

[ultracape]

That was so funny and so in character with cannon. I especially loved Neal remarking that he was that bad after Mos said he had been reasoable.

[frith_in_thorns]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you both enjoyed and were amused by this :)