wow for some reason I never get replies on LJ in my email. I'm posting bits from my pulp adventure novel to be in a second. It is more in line with what I am going to do for NANOWRIMO.
But I kind of feel like i'm getting the door to open, and non isnt about quality isnt about quanitity, which is helpful to me.
It's got a lot of promise. There are typos and spelling and punctuation errors that could be corrected, which would help readability but yah, loads of promise. There's many gorgeous bits of phrasing and it moves well. It doesn't feel finished to me though, as if it's a part of a much larger story. It reminds me a bit of some of Micheal Gira's work. Have you ever read his short stories?
never heard of him, but this is just me trying to get the door to narrative open. It's stuck tight, and I'm wiggling at it. I hope to have it loose by the beginning of November.
But this is a throw away piece, though I might use the idea elsewhere another time. Posting my writing for today right now.
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I'm posting bits from my pulp adventure novel to be in a second.
It is more in line with what I am going to do for NANOWRIMO.
But I kind of feel like i'm getting the door to open, and non isnt about quality isnt about quanitity, which is helpful to me.
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There are typos and spelling and punctuation errors that could be corrected, which would help readability but yah, loads of promise. There's many gorgeous bits of phrasing and it moves well.
It doesn't feel finished to me though, as if it's a part of a much larger story.
It reminds me a bit of some of Micheal Gira's work. Have you ever read his short stories?
Save this, whatever you do.
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It's stuck tight, and I'm wiggling at it.
I hope to have it loose by the beginning of November.
But this is a throw away piece, though I might use the idea elsewhere another time.
Posting my writing for today right now.
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Whatever you think of it now don't throw it away, you could use it later.
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