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Mar 23, 2005 17:28

Title: Stay with Me

Author: Frodo_naatulien
Pairing: F/S
Rating: NC-17

Part 5 - A Cry in the Night )

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sorrowful_eagle April 5 2005, 19:28:39 UTC
Mmmmm! That was good!

I thought, rather than reply to each part, I'd just write you one comment altogether!

I'd just like to say that I really thoroughly enjoyed this story - so sweet, funny, tender, hot, and even a little bit sad. And very well written - and this is just your first? Wow. Wish I could write this well full stop!

Hope to read more from you in the future!

~S

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frodo_naatulien April 5 2005, 21:33:37 UTC
sorrowful_eagle... You Angel!!!

You have just made my day! : D

I'm so glad that you enjoyed my story. You're the first to read it, aside from my beta, or, the first to comment anyway. It never really occured to me that I'd post it and no one would read. : (

Oh, but thank you *so much* for your very kind words. Yes, it is my first fic and it took me quite a while to write. As I'm sure you figured out, I adore Frodo and Sam, so I enjoyed every minute it took to write this story. ; )

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. It means a lot to me. : )

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sorrowful_eagle April 6 2005, 13:34:25 UTC
It never really occured to me that I'd post it and no one would read. : (

I know how you feel - I have the same problem (on the rare ocassions I actually post something these days)! Don't let it worry you though - and keep writing!!

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frodo_naatulien April 7 2005, 21:54:13 UTC
Hi sorrowful_eagle,

Awww, thanks for the encouragement. That's so sweet of you.

I know how you feel - I have the same problem (on the rare ocassions I actually post something these days)!

And that makes me feel rather sad. I went and checked out your LJ the other day after I replied to your post on mine. I've not seen your username before. I see that you have a very lovely website with your own stories. I took a sneak peek into your story, "(Eternity and) the Language of Flowers". I read through the summaries, and Chapter 8: Of Special Yuletide Greetings, caught my eye. I thought I would start with that chapter, just to get a quick taste.

And, I must say -- what a delicious taste that was! That was a beautiful chapter, Sorrowful. I'm very much looking forward to going back and starting at Chapter 1 and reading it in it's entirety, along with the other stories you have there ( ... )

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mariole April 6 2005, 04:12:56 UTC
Hi, Juliana! This was a sweet fic. I have to admit, though, that Chapter 3 is my favorite. There can never be too much happy hobbit sex for me! Cheers, and congratulations on posting!

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frodo_naatulien April 6 2005, 17:02:39 UTC
Mariole!!!!!!!

Hi : D

Oh, thank you! Thank you ever so much for reading my story. I am quite honored.
And so glad you liked it.

I love your icon, too, btw! Goes quite well with that Chap 3 ; ), wouldn't you say?

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mariole April 6 2005, 17:14:21 UTC
That's what I thought when I posted it ( ... )

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frodo_naatulien April 7 2005, 14:45:29 UTC
Gosh... you are a dear one Mariole.

You know... it's odd. I posted my story on my LJ first, and left it there for close to 2 weeks. I did that because I was hoping to get a general idea of what people thought of it before I actually put it out to the wider audience at MEN. I also broke it down into five parts thinking it would make for easier reading, and I also put all five parts up at the same time. My reason for that was to show that even though it was in parts, it was a complete story and not a WIP -- I think there are many who tend to shy from a WIP.

To be truly honest though, I really didn't expect a lot to read it -- since I am basically a newcomber and unknown. Though I was hoping maybe a handful or so might. I guess I think people think like me. I will give any story a chance if it's about Frodo and Sam. *grin* Ok, well, so maybe - Merry and Pippin - lover's won't want to read. *hehe ( ... )

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sayhello April 9 2005, 22:56:45 UTC
Hi, I came to read your story on mariole's recommendation. She knows I'm a sucker for a good F/S story. :-D I really liked yours! Lovely looks into the emotions of my favorite OTP.

99% of the F/S stories out there are either First Times or Last Times or Grey Havens reunions. It's really nice to see a story from the point of view of an already existing relationship. Now that they're already together, we see Frodo and Sam working through and working out the emotional baggage they both bring to this relationship. Has nothing to do with how much they love each other -- it still needs to be worked through.

And, of course, some lovely hobbit smut thrown in makes it all the better!

Thanks for posting. Keep it coming! I've friended you, hope you don't mind!

Hewene

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sayhello April 9 2005, 23:00:03 UTC
Hey! I just noticed that your birthday is the day after mine. :-D Welcome to another Gemini!

Hewene

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frodo_naatulien April 11 2005, 20:36:21 UTC
Oh, hey! : D Happy Birthday to us... Happy Birthday to u...

Oh wait!! Not yet. We still have a month of so to go.

Thank goodness!!!

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frodo_naatulien April 11 2005, 20:26:03 UTC
Hello there, Hewene...

Thank you so much for reading : ) Thank dear, sweet Mariole for me too.

It's really nice to see a story from the point of view of an already existing relationship.

My sentiments exactly! This story was simply a day in the life of Frodo and Sam. Who wouldn't want to peep in on Frodo and Sam for a day, right? *hehe*

And, of course, some lovely hobbit smut thrown in makes it all the better!

Can't hardly go wrong there, huh? Phew! That was so exci... I mean... fun to write. *blushes*

Thanks again, Hewene, for reading. I'm so glad you liked it. : D And I'm friending you back ♥

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shoesparks April 22 2005, 02:12:54 UTC
I am not sure if I ever told you how much I have enjoyed all I have read of your works...
but I do indeed find them most enjoyable...
They touch places in my heart that not many can....
Thanks again...

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frodo_naatulien April 22 2005, 12:36:38 UTC
Hi Shoesparks,

Awww... what a kind thing for you to say. Thank you very much! I'm glad my story touched you so. I think I can pretty much say the same thing about your lovely photomanips. In fact, the current manip on your icon just about knocks me off my feet!!! *sighs* Frodo and Sam simply make me melt!

Thanks again for your kind words : D

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siouxieq April 24 2005, 05:44:48 UTC
Wow! I just read the whole 5 parts through in one go. This fic is wonderful (dare I say beautiful and sweet). Your first fic -You have done a great job. I loved it all (although I'd like to know what the Gaffer said to Sam the next day).

Found that you had a fic posted through a comment in Frodosweetstuff's journal and thought I would have a quick look. Glad I did.

Do you mind if I friend you so that I can see any more fics that you write?

Don't worry too much about not getting comments - it just takes a while to get out there and I'm sure a lot of people read and don't comment (I'm guilty of that)

Once again, great fic!!!!

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frodo_naatulien April 24 2005, 16:46:11 UTC
Hi siouxieq,

Another reader, yeah! *jumping for joy*

This fic is wonderful (dare I say beautiful and sweet).

Ah, yes... beautiful and sweet *giggle*

Oh, siouxieq, thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it. Please, I'd be happy for you to friend me. I'll friend you back. : D

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