Fic: Space They Cannot Touch

May 13, 2011 17:13

Title: Chapter Thirteen: Service Fee
Pairing: Matthew/Dominic
Rating: PG-13
Summary:  Morning brings melancholy and a big mistake. 
Disclaimer: I do not own Muse. The events within are entirely fictional. 
Betas: The dynamic duo millionstar  and dolce_piccante  . You both are made of beauty and win. 
Warnings: Angst, language. 
Previous Parts:   Prologue, Chapter One, Chapter Two, ( Read more... )

muse, fic, matthew/dominic, space they cannot touch

Leave a comment

Comments 28

muse_manticore May 13 2011, 15:21:00 UTC
oh ffs Matt you stupid baboon.
You overthink everything!

*hugs Dom*

Another great chapter sweety. I missed this. <3<3

Reply

frolicandfall May 18 2011, 08:25:38 UTC
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you're still enjoying it. :D

Reply


easilyglorious May 13 2011, 18:23:32 UTC
Bless their hearts, they're so confused, that it's not helping improve things at all! I have a feeling that it'll work itself out, though, right? Please?

In other news, I squeed a lot, as in a major, major way, when I saw your update! Your story is absolutely brilliant - the level of introspection is so well explored, and the emotions are minutely depicted - it feels so real without ever burdening the storyline with unnecessary details.

Lovely chapter, bb! <33333333

Reply

frolicandfall May 18 2011, 08:25:59 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely comment. &hearts

Reply


pat401 May 13 2011, 18:50:54 UTC
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reply

frolicandfall May 18 2011, 08:26:20 UTC
Working on it right now! ;)

Reply


engel_sehnsucht May 13 2011, 19:36:11 UTC
If he can’t be a good boyfriend to Dom, he’s just going to have to settle for being a good friend instead.
NO. D:

But lovely to see this update, even if it's sad. ;( Loved it!

Reply

frolicandfall May 18 2011, 08:27:26 UTC
Thanks!

I'm starting to get tired of writing angst. Maybe things will perk up soon? Not that I'm making any promises...

Reply


l_starlight_13 May 14 2011, 00:18:26 UTC
Okay wow. Wowwowwowwowwowwowwow. Seriously no words to describe how good this fic is... But I'll try anyway :D
So I saw this update.. Hadn't read any of the other chapters though but thought I'd read it from the start and see how it was... I read it non stop until about 2:30am when I promptly fell asleep :P and then when I woke up I read the rest :) that is how utterly addictive and amazing this is! I love it sooooon much. *applauds you on your incredible writing*

But back to this chapter.... About the ending, just no Matt no. Not the answer... Nooooooooooo :(

Thanks for writing! Hope you update soon :)

Reply

frolicandfall May 18 2011, 08:28:25 UTC
*blushes*

Thank you so much, and welcome to STCT :P. Please, sit down and help yourself to tea and coffee.

I'm hoping to have an update ready for all very soon.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up