Space They Cannot Touch

[frolicandfall]

Title: Chapter Fourteen: It Ain't Me, Babe
Pairing: Matthew/Dominic
Rating: PG-13
Summary:  Matt searches for courage, Dom is in for a shock, and Chris is just trying to be a good friend. 
Disclaimer: I do not own Muse. The events within are entirely fictional. 
Betas: The dynamic duo millionstar  and dolce_piccante  . You both are made of beauty and win. 
Warnings: Angst,

Comments

[bloodsport7]

First of all: Man, have i missed this fic!
Secondly: wow, a very...brave(?) decision of Matt's. We ourselves see his best intentions, but he's not communicated them well with Dom. I hope he explains more about his feelings and they manage to work through this.
Another great chapter! <333

[frolicandfall]

It seems like both of them are rubbish at communicating their feelings. Hopefully they'll work something out soon...

:D

[ashamedbliss]

Their arguments are strangely beautiful, how they each want different things hurts so much to read, but at the same time it's interesting to see each POV.

Gah, Dom. Dom Dom Dom, he needs to stop being so hard on himself :(

*hugs* this is amazing ♥

[frolicandfall]

*hugs back*

Thank you.

One of the hardest things about this fic is writing them both so that neither one is necessarily the bad guy. It's like you said, they both want different things right now and neither feels able to compromise.

[muse_manticore]

This made me sad. :(
Well written just.... so unhappy. *slaps Matt for being a douche*

[frolicandfall]

Your icon is a hundred kinds of adorable. &hearts

Thanks for reading.

[muse_manticore]

Aww thanks darling xxx

[eskarlata]

I only caught up with this story today, read it all in one go (was a long journey xD) and the main thought roaming my mind is well...I´m impressed. The thing I love the most is the different point of views, the way you change the perspectives and make us understand the story from all the angles. It´s incredibly well written, the emotion of the characters I mean...WOW, when Dom realized he couldn´t hear almost makes me cry, when Matt had this outburst while drunk and starts shouting at Dom knowing he couldn´t hear him, Matt´s anger towards Dom cos he felt rejected when Dom tried to bring them back together, the flashback with Gaia...THAT flashback omg, was so poignant, the woman finally telling him about her realization, I felt for her, I don´t think it´d be easy to discover that you´re in a relationship with a man who´s in love with another man. And now of course, Dom´s need for intimacy with Matt. It´s awesome.

You´re doing a brilliant job, this is great.

[frolicandfall]

Wow.

*blushes*

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment. I'm truly flattered, and I'm glad that you're enjoying it.

[l_starlight_13]

Oh wow. D:

[frolicandfall]

Thanks for reading.