hi all

[fromovich]

So. You say i need to capitalize. So here I am capitalizing. So its almost june. Soon i'll be home and away from all this. they say i'm getting leave sometime in july. and that i'm supposed to be home in the middle of september. i got off work tonight so i can work even longer. i'm gonna get to play some d&d soon. Isn't that great.

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[implet14]

Hmmmm... a D&D room? We'll see about that! As far as making your ideas more understandable goes, I think you do need work on that. I would say that the first step to improving that would be to make a list of all the details that are involved on scrap paper before you write it out. That way you'll be sure to include ALL the important information. Another option would be to just make sure you reread what you wrote before you decide it's a final copy. Sometimes just by reading something, you'll notice that it was unclear. Anyway, it's Monday morning at around 9am for you and you're not here. Well, stay safe and stay positive. Keep on writing!
love, Sandy