VD day poem! Err... I mean Valentine's Day Poem

[fromthemill]

I had writen a longer one, but forgot it at work so didn't get a chance to post it on Valentine's day and it seems silly to post it now. So intead I wrote a shorter one that will have to tide you over for 366 days until I have an excuse to post the other one.

Your love for me is like a child's
You intrest only lasts a while
My love for you is like

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[vikibristowe]

Your love for me is like that of a child's
Your interest only lasts but a little a while
My love for you is like a crime
Cause you were only born in nineteen-ninety-nine.

I made it better. Miss you Patrick.

[vikibristowe]

Wrong. I had 8 sylables on every line. It was perfect.

Yours had all sorts of sylable action going on.

[anonymous]

I must say I'm a tad disapointed... I was looking forward to this poem...
*sighs*
whatever..
-Laura
P.s. the last line reminded me of the song "99 Problems" by Jayz

[anonymous]

Maybe I'll post that longer (when I find it)

[music_by_night]

i got 99 problems and a bitch aint one.

i am the mega poet.

[anonymous]

Where did you get the background image for your journal.?

[fromthemill]

I wish I could remember the excact address for you, but what I can tell you is that it was a website that provides free patterns for backgrounds in websites. I think my google search was for something like "free repeating patterns" or something like that.

But what you see on my page isn't the original image. I desaturated it and reduced the contrast.

Hope that helps.