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[frostflowers]

Sooo... Steampunk. Yup. Never written it before, but it's very shiny - must be all the brass steam-engines, or something

Comments

[janaewriter]

It looks like you have an intriguing start. Guards. Murder. Alchemist's Guild.

I'm interested in seeing how this all comes together!

[frostflowers]

Oh, trust me - so am I. I did some brainstorming today, and it's coming together a little more every day. I know how Whitlow died, now!

... and all the evidence points towards two different murderers, unknown to each other - the first one poisons him, and the second one beats him to death while he's already dying. Yup. I wonder who they are...

[janaewriter]

Two murderers would be most exciting. It'd probably drive the investigators crazy until someone finally figures out there were two of them.

[lady_akatari]

Ooooooooh. Indeed. Yes.

*dances*

(I'm thinking of something I've seen with that approximate premise, but I can't remember what. *hissy fit* *wishes memory wasn't acting so badly*)

Want to read it when is finished! *puppy eyes*