Comments? Criticism? Praise? Simple OOC contact?

[frosty_mind]

Comments, criticism, praise, suggestions, requests, ooc contact, etc. all welcome here.

Seriously, guys, criticism is welcome. I can't fix a problem if I don't know it exists.

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Comments

Anon

[anonymous]

This is a test of the anonymous critiquing system.

Re: Anon

[frosty_mind]

Anonymous posts are online; this one was unscreened for testing purposes.

[anonymous]

Hello! I don't think this has been brought to your attention yet, but I think instead of doing a shorter thread with really long, almost tl;dr-style paragraphs of non-stop speech, you should break it up. It will both help getting CR, remaining IC (replying is like Skype or a phone call, but just recording a message and hitting submit, though it might seem that way), and allowing other characters to react accordingly to what Emma has said.

What I'm getting at here is making shorter breaks in Emma's speech, with thoughts or other [ insert action here ] things, if only to make it a little easier to tag.

And I know I'm not the only one who thinks this.

Shorter posts and shorter paragraphs

[frosty_mind]

Fair enough, and I'll try. Thank you for taking the time to chime in.