Fic: Of Apathetic Twinges (2/2)

Jan 08, 2012 19:16

Title: Of Apathetic Twinges (2/2)
Author: frostywonder
Rating: M/Adult
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Summary: Draco doesn't realize how numb he is until Potter brings back his emotions.
Warnings: MPreg
Word count: 8400 (total)

Part 1

Part 2 )

harry/draco, hp fanfiction, mpreg

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duchessofdublin January 9 2012, 19:28:51 UTC
I've always loved these almost strange,alien-nated!Draco fics. And what a fantasic job you have done ! James... ASDFGHJKLADAGH CUTENESS AND MORE BABIES!!!
*cough*sequelplease*cough* ;]

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frostywonder January 10 2012, 23:54:20 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! ♥

Haha, actually, I did consider doing a sequel-esque bit but from Harry's POV but I haven't fully decided yet.

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shikurai17 January 11 2012, 02:51:21 UTC
I really think you should do it! :D I've always wondered what the other character's POV is in a fic. I've questions on why Harry would be attracted to Draco? They didn't get a long when they were kids and as a adult Draco is suffering depression. Why would he fall for Draco? Your fic showed that Harry was interested in him, but I'm wondering why? I've so many questions. It'll be great to read from harry's POV. I really liked how you wrote this fic, so I would love reading more fics from you.

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jan_rea January 9 2012, 21:33:59 UTC
OOH....!! This is fascinating, touching and captivating all at the same time~ I love how you wrote the fic, and your Harry and Draco are just lovely! And the ending just left me with all sorts of fluffy feelings~ ♥!

If you ever do write a sequel to this I would LOVE to read it~ =)

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frostywonder January 10 2012, 23:55:56 UTC
Thanks! It was my first time writing in present tense so I was worried about how that came across, especially with the emotional aspect. I'm glad you liked it! ♥

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frostywonder January 10 2012, 23:51:08 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! ♥

The forgetfulness was a play on the apathy, kind of a "can't be bothered to remember" sort of thing. :)

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shikurai17 January 10 2012, 01:09:52 UTC
Loved it. I love reading really well written depressed!Draco fics. I really liked how you wrote Draco in this. His depression and him slowly getting better. You really showed how depressed he was and how he was healing. Lots of writers tell that he's depressed, but you showed us. Thanks for writing this fic.

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frostywonder January 10 2012, 23:52:07 UTC
Thanks! I am happy that you liked it and that it came across correctly--I am usually pants at portraying emotions! XD

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sess18 January 10 2012, 05:41:18 UTC
Great! I like Draco P.O.V.

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frostywonder January 10 2012, 23:56:20 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :D

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