My Not-So-Lucky Love Charm Chapter 1

Nov 07, 2011 23:42

Title: My Not-So-Lucky Love Charm
Pairing: Yamada/OC
Type: Chaptered
Rating: PG-13 (just being super safe)
Genre: Romance, Comedy
Summary: Ayamono Kari gets rejected by her crush and to make matters worse Yamada Ryosuke publicly humiliates her about her rejection. She takes a short trip to Okinawa to get away from it all. She ends up stumbling across a ( Read more... )

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daisukidesuhsj November 9 2011, 03:19:01 UTC
*pesters you* loljk

this wasn't boring! I liked it! And I found the conversation between the old shrine keeper and Kari hilarious when she brought up the gay thing xD
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Aww, but I feel really bad for Kari TT~TT GEEZ, YAMADA! LEARN HOW TO TREAT GIRLS, WILL YA? LOL, sorry I had to do it xD

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frozenstar35 November 9 2011, 04:20:45 UTC
Yay I was hoping someone would find that funny XD

lol yea I feel bad for making Yamada a jerk in my fics two times in a row XD but I love stories where jerk guys turn into sweeties <3

Thanks for reading and commenting <3

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ichigocherry November 9 2011, 05:13:29 UTC
I liked the story so far! At least the heroine is not so flawless-heroine-that-makes-it-weird-because-nobody's-perfect. :D She have flaws and that's makes it interesting.

And I'll definately beat Yama to a pulp the next time I see him. I bet he's gay. And he's jealous because he knew Kari (feels weird writing this because Kari in my country = Curry... XD) likes Yuto. TEHEHEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHE

Meanest class. Ever. I'm fine if she's lower than normal. But she's normal!!! How can you tease someone who's normal?! I bet everyone there are jerks. Hummmppppppph! *is pissed off now*

Can't wait for the update! :D /currently running around lurking in your journal. XD

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frozenstar35 November 11 2011, 04:16:38 UTC
Thanks! I can't write a "Perfect girl" story because then my readers and I wouldn't be able to relate to the character :D

Kari=Curry LOL haha i'm not good at making up names so I look up japanse words that relate to my fic, Ayamono Kari is a jumbled version of a less common way of saying "lucky person" in Japanese ^^

I hope you have some fun running around my boring journal XP

Thanks for reading and commening! <3

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ichigocherry November 12 2011, 00:09:26 UTC
Eeeeexactly! 8D

Seriously! I'm like ...Curry? XD
(the pronunciation is exactly the same too. XD )

Cool~ I usually just randomly choose the name from the Baby names site. Hahahahahhaha

I did. :p

You're welcome! :D

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yamayuuri November 9 2011, 11:46:59 UTC
This is so interesting!!! (σ≧∀≦)σ
I'm so curious!!! Will Yama-chan falling love with her???
Waiting for the next chapter \(^o^)/

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frozenstar35 November 11 2011, 04:43:18 UTC
aww thanks :D

Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

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hi_chew_galore November 9 2011, 23:07:16 UTC
wahhhhhhhh ~~~ i like the first chapter~~~ i cant wait for the next chp~ hahhaha soooo exciteddddd :3 gooodd job!!

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frozenstar35 November 11 2011, 05:02:13 UTC
Yay! Thanks! I'm so glad you're pumped up for my fic :3

Thanks for reading and commenting <3

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luvdaisuke November 10 2011, 07:49:20 UTC
HAHAHAHA, I LIKE THIS. I like this a lot. I can't wait to see more of it haha XD

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frozenstar35 November 11 2011, 05:03:09 UTC
Thanks!

Thanks for reading and commenting <3

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