My Not-So-Lucky Love Charm Chapter 6

Dec 17, 2011 21:41



Title: My Not-So-Lucky Love Charm
Pairing: Yamada/OC
Type: Chaptered
Rating: PG-13 (just being super safe)
Genre: Romance, Comedy
Summary: Ayamono Kari gets rejected by her crush and to make matters worse Yamada Ryosuke publicly humiliates her about her rejection. She takes a short trip to Okinawa to get away from it all. She ends up stumbling across a ( Read more... )

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mythirteeeenth December 18 2011, 05:56:38 UTC
I'm freaking glad you are. HAHAHA XD This. is. good. He was found out. HAHAHAHAHA

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frozenstar35 December 19 2011, 18:49:00 UTC
I'm freaking glad that you like reading me story XD

Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

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yamayuuri December 18 2011, 06:06:44 UTC
LOL
Yama-chan is so funny!!!
Especially when he shouts to her sister!!! 

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frozenstar35 December 19 2011, 18:49:34 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

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fujikawarinfr December 18 2011, 06:29:21 UTC
Too many cute things >,<
Yamachan called Kari as his GF :O she is so lucky XDD

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frozenstar35 December 19 2011, 18:51:46 UTC
yay I'm glad you think its cute XD
and lol yea Kari is lucky XD

Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

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le_chocolats December 18 2011, 06:32:58 UTC
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS CHAPTER A LOT!!!! Uwaaaa, how can you write a story as fluffy and as funny at the same time as this!!!! XDDDDD

Really, I laughed along as I read this chapter XDDD

“That’s not necessary and you’re sick you should really stay at home and rest.”

“Aw thanks for caring for me Kari. But I’m fine really.” I wasn’t caring for you, you idiot this is just something you should say to a sick person.<----- yamada is blinded by his love for kari, everything kari does seems perfect to him LOLOLOLOL... XDDDD

And the part where people spotted them lying together on the grass is just too cute and hilarious gahahahahaha, and yamada became such a sweet boy now XDDDD I bet it'll be hard for Kari to not fall for him XDDDD

And busted!!! Yamada considered Kari as his girlfriend????!!! Ohohohoho, interesting!! XDDDD I'll be waiting for the next update XDDDD

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frozenstar35 December 19 2011, 18:56:27 UTC
Yay! Glad you like it! The reason I can write fluffy and funny stories is because of my wonderful readers ^^

Yay! I made you laugh! :D

lol yes yamada is a blind idiot XD

Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

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ryutarodragon December 18 2011, 06:42:35 UTC
“I took it! Where’d the girl go!?” he asked.

Reiko smiled mischievously at me, “Why!? Who was she!?”

“She’s my girlfriend! Where’d she go!?”

“I’M YOUR WHAT!?” I yelled.==> wahaha!!! DEFINITELY LOL AND HILARIOUS!!!! X''DDDD YAMADA ROCK YOU!!

“……..Oh! My flu is so bad it’s making me delusional! Ah!” he yelled.==> good. so very bad reason kid. if you want lying, go learn something from yuto. LOL.

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ryutarodragon December 18 2011, 06:45:36 UTC
and oh my god! i forget to say : "HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!" *took out yamada and gave it to you

LOOLLL XDDDDD

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frozenstar35 December 19 2011, 18:59:40 UTC
lol glad you thought that part was hilarious! XD

and yes Yamada was a very bad liar XD

And thanks for wishing me happy birthday!
And yay! I got Yamada! XD I will treasure him forever XD

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ryutarodragon December 20 2011, 02:10:42 UTC
XDDDDD it's nothing--this is your repayment because made such a good and berathtakingly beautiful fic!!! write moaaareee

because you're fic is more good than mine DDDX

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