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Aug 17, 2010 13:10


Title: As Wisdom Grows (2/3)
Characters/Pairing: Kurt/Mike, Mr. and Mrs. Chang, Burt Hummel, Glee club, Mr. Schue, Miss Pilsbury
Rating: R for swearing and sexual references to rape.
Word Count: 7,707 for this part
Summary: Mike gets raped. Kurt just tries to help him through it.
Warnings: There are references to rape.

Notes: For the Mike/Kurt Read more... )

glee, mike/kurt

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fated_darkness August 18 2010, 01:23:19 UTC
Freaking. Love. You.

I am going to be super depressed when this is over. And Mike and Matt holding hands? So cute and sad.

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freashbread August 18 2010, 01:30:01 UTC
damn it! I need you to have finished writing this already! I am on edge!!!

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ghostformachine August 18 2010, 03:43:55 UTC
You keep being sensitive and realistic in your portrayal of Mike and his reactions to what he's going through and his reactions to how the people around are responding. I love you and this story.

On a slightly related note, I want to see how the Florence Nightengale effect is going to play out.

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whitearchmage August 18 2010, 04:01:40 UTC
Ok, I'm going to start quoting madly at you because it was just. that. good.

Kurt lets him cry and doesn’t judge. Doesn’t try for hugs and kisses to make it all better, doesn’t try for words to fix Mike’s broken, hurting pride. And Mike’s glad, right now he’s all spikes and self-defensive lashing out, he doesn't need that.
This touched me so much because I'm very physical with my friends so I would be stupid enough to try and hug someone in Mike's position without realizing it'd be a very bad idea.

The private nature of the emotion Mike is letting show shocks Kurt into silence. Mike smiles into his phone, whispers, “Bye,” and hangs up.
This. just this... it's beautiful and shows so much emotion and development, it's almost a throwaway sentence but it tugs at the heartstrings...

They started hanging out because of it. And now everyone wants him to flip a switch and start dating?
Heh, almost breaking the fourth wall, but serves a lot in showing Mike's inner conflict (although everything is showing it) and reluctance in getting ( ... )

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militantstemmed August 18 2010, 04:26:26 UTC
This is incredible. So realistic. I can't wait to read the rest. Well done.

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