Comments | fruiticia: the voice of a distant star

vocaris in fruiticia

the voice of a distant star

Mar 13, 2011 17:30

title the voice of a distant star
fandom kpop, shinee, f(x)
pairing minho x soojung
word count 1376
rating pg

( He feels the vibration in his pocket, he ignores it until it stops and hesitates to pull the little machine out, but he pulls it out anyway. He looks at the beeping screen and his heart is tugging at the message played throughout the screen. It's laughable at how she never fails to send texts, and he never replies. But he's always, always, always waiting for them. He keeps them all in a file inside his computer, so he can read, re-read and re-read them when he misses her. )

!kpop: f(x), !one-shot, !fanfiction, rating: pg, !kpop: shinee

Comments 18

neavalhalla March 13 2011, 11:28:33 UTC

I was a bit crying when Minho said that Krystal was no longer on Earth and at the last part as well. LOL, actually because it's Minho/Krystal and I'm kinda craving for this xD this fic is so sweet for me, ide. I'm going to put it to my mems because it's sort of adorable to read several times :3♥

vocaris March 16 2011, 00:55:43 UTC

/hands a box of tissues
thank you for reading, i hope my attempt in making this as angst as possible worked. :3

kazuka076 March 13 2011, 14:43:46 UTC

a sci-fi? tastes good ;D
In a point, I love this kind of plot, a sci-fi for kpop-fiction-stuffs is so rare to find. And I love that >83
but the angsty end

vocaris March 16 2011, 00:56:55 UTC

sci-fi are actually hard to write, that's why many people don't write them. because you have to, basically, create a whole new world in one story. it's pretty hard. ):
but the reason why i could do this was because of a manga i read, so most of the credits don't really go to me. but thank you so much for reading this, and feeling touched. ♥

obsessedheart March 13 2011, 23:54:06 UTC

THIS IS SO SAD ;A; i love fics like these, michelle and this was just perfect ♥

although, i can't help noticing that i watched an anime like this once ._. did you get this from an anime or did you really get it from a song LOL but either ways, it was beautiful and so heart moving ;_;

vocaris March 16 2011, 00:57:32 UTC

♥
i did write a note before i started the oneshot, that this was a parody of the voice of a distant star manga. emily, y u ignore my author's note. ))))): /sad

obsessedheart March 16 2011, 05:02:39 UTC

ohh, maybe theres a anime of it too LOL sorry ;_;

vagueclarity March 14 2011, 06:07:39 UTC

On the verge of tears - this is beautiful.
And the last line? Perfection.

vocaris March 16 2011, 00:57:55 UTC

your comment is too much compliment for me.
i appreciate it ♥

aoza March 14 2011, 06:44:39 UTC

This was... just wow. I have no words. I've never read anything close to Sci-fi until this oneshot. Wonderful job. ♥

vocaris March 16 2011, 00:58:23 UTC

thank you so much. :) this was only a parody, so most of the credits don't go to me. but thanks again. loves.