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frychicken

fic: Bathroom Break - Demi/Selena

Nov 25, 2009 01:50

Title: Bathroom Break
Pairing: Demi/Selena
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Oh, hey, plotless smut! AMA bathroom sex. Nothing else.
Warning: Read summary. Seriously. No plot.

disclaimer: This story is lies, lies, lies. Complete fiction.

( She might look back on this moment and see it clearer than she does now... )

fic, fic: demi/selena

Comments 5

th3who November 25 2009, 16:48:59 UTC

aw. hot

kittyspotneko November 25 2009, 21:31:46 UTC

i thought it was hot and though it seemed sad i liked the last line

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frychicken November 26 2009, 02:02:22 UTC

Aw, glad I didn't disappoint. I kind of channeled my pessimism more so into a different fic, actually, haha.

xxalynaj November 26 2009, 01:59:51 UTC

this was hott. the last line slightly confused me though. :(

arkeis07 November 26 2009, 07:15:40 UTC

I'm sorry to say I have been missing out on your fics because of my absence from the comm.

This is obviously a grave sin I have committed, please forgive me. You are quickly becoming a shining star for me.

I love these types of fics, where the words transform into the feelings of urgency during sex. The use of repetition is one of my favorite techniques, it just ... it brings the emotions out, and represses logical thought.

Excellent, and in so little words. Very impressive :)