The culmination of emotions

Nov 04, 2004 15:17

It's a cold autumn evening. A couple are on a bed, holding, kissing and talking to each other as they do every time they see each other. Through natural progression of conversation, he says he won't be going to university next year. She asks why, and he tells her that he has things going for him here, and that it would break his heart to leave her ( Read more... )

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cojiro November 4 2004, 16:37:45 UTC
Very nice. Prepare for a Marxist criticism of that very acceptable piece of literature shortly.

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fswmart November 4 2004, 16:42:20 UTC
I'm looking for a publishing deal; don't shoot me down!

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luinthrandir November 4 2004, 16:47:25 UTC
Seriously.. that was really nice

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jeremy33662 November 5 2004, 16:42:50 UTC
But enough about me and Rachel...
...Man I'm funny

But on a serious note, touching sentiment. Many congratulations to you decade buddy, and all the best to you two for the future!

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luinthrandir November 5 2004, 16:56:22 UTC
That really means a lot to me jez, but don't you think you should be telling martin, not me?

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jeremy33662 November 5 2004, 17:22:56 UTC
Sorry! - Was meant for Martin. Clicked on wrong "Reply to this" link.

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*sniff* tannersoap November 7 2004, 06:43:52 UTC
that was..fucking beautiful

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