a poem

Apr 16, 2006 14:51

my hands on the rotary dial ( Read more... )

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wally_ April 17 2006, 05:05:14 UTC
That was brilliant.

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mark__mywords April 17 2006, 12:02:50 UTC
thanks . now you have to post something ;)

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deathcab89 April 17 2006, 18:15:18 UTC
in nervous memory
science tells me

that our emotions are affected by...
Beautiful line breaks.

I really like the unity in this piece. It's very nice.

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cows_to_the_wor April 17 2006, 18:52:00 UTC
That was very solid, Mark. The images flow ridiculously well together, even though they seem somewhat metaphysical in nature.

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