Solitude

[wanting2change]

Solitude

It is a cage
That keeps me locked up.
No key,
Lost so long ago.
Time is a glacier,
Frozen yet flowing
Bitter yet beautiful.
Contradictions etched in wood
A heart on a tree
A heart made for you and me.
Long ago before the lonely prison
Locked up the emotions
We shared.
Now you're gone
Lost
My key gone
Forever.

Comments

[cows_to_the_wor]

If I were to make any changes to this piece, I would make "Solitude" the title, and this the opening line "It is a cage..." Also, in the fourth last line you have "your" where it should be "you're"

[wanting2change]

Wow ya i like that! and thx for the grammer help