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[Sporking] Never Say Never - Chapter 4

May 28, 2015 15:41

*long, deep breath* Guys. This chapter is hard. This chapter is honestly very disturbing and disgusting, and could possibly be very triggering to a lot of people. I confess that the prose is still very stilted and bland, as it has been in the previous chapters, but that doesn’t change the fact that the content is very serious. And it is not handled ( Read more... )

warning: rape, warning: character bashing, sporking, fandom: tokyo mew mew, sporker: fufuyurifan, fic: never say never

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I don't know how, but I left this comment unposted for over a week and only noticed it now talonicefire June 14 2015, 13:34:07 UTC

I don't get the entirety of that AN where the Suethor interacts with the characters. It just feels like Kisshu did do something. And other than the creepy factor, I don't get why the author is shipping them if Ichigo never trusts Kisshu.

"I'm sorry, koneko-chan. Would a kiss make it feel better?" Kisshu smirked.

No, but maybe a smack in the kisser would! *smacks*

Goddammit Suethor, how the hell can you write anyone being that insensitive and still believe that means they care for that person?!

And honestly, I'm not gonna blame Ichigo for her response to him. Sure, it's not actually his fault the Suethor morphed Masaya into a cheating slime ball, but he actually hasn't been saying anything to help the situation either. He's so far just been smug and flippant over something that's clearly distressed her.

Why does she hate me so much? It's not like I had anything to do with that tree-hugger cheating on her. No, but you could have done something other than smirk and try to kiss her, which was unintentionally mocking her feelings ( ... )

Re: I don't know how, but I left this comment unposted for over a week and only noticed it now talonicefire June 14 2015, 13:34:27 UTC

[Zakuro] left, with Pudding and Lettuce not to far behind after

Wait? So no one is going to bother go check on Ichigo? I mean, these three are meant to be her friends and haven't been demonised by the Suethor. So why are they just getting angry at Mint but not giving a crap to check on Ichigo to make sure she's alright?

They’ve got some sort of weird fucking telekinetic connection now?

Well, the Suethor could show us why Kisshu and Ichigo love each other, and have the two characters develop genuine feelings for one another. OR she can just say "they share a mind, so it's true love" so that she doesn't need to show us anything.

"If I tell you, you have to promise not to get angry, okay?"

What? This just came out of nowhere, even for this Suethor. What exactly is Ichigo fearing as a reaction here? Is she worried that Kisshu may want to kill Masaya for this? Because then should say "promise you won't try to kill Masaya again". Is she just that emotional that she couldn't take his anger as a response because she expects he (like ( ... )