[Sporking] The Plus One of RWBY - Bonus - Worldbuilding

[fufuyurifan]

[Fufu]: So guys, this is more of a bonus feature to go with not just ProAJ’s Plus One fic, but to go with all of his stories featuring his AJ self insert. Joining me is Talon and Kirby

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[talonicefire]

I apologise in advance for writing so much in the last two pieces of the sporking. I promise in future, it will not be happening for every chapter. (Really!)

[eurowatch]

'The angels can't do things themselves though, they have to send someone in for them. Their right hand, their pawn, their warrior, their will, whatever they may call them

[beacon80]

[Fufu]: And now we have a multiverse.
Technically, we already had one, what with Boy getting sucked into Remnant. Of course, as is often the case with Sues and Stus, this element isn't really necessary. There isn't much going on here that requires Boy to be from another world. Especially now that he's getting his powers from angels instead of randomly having them.
The only complication I see is that if he grew up on Remnant, there's no excuse to add him as a fifth member to an existing team (not that this ever made that much sense to begin with). Even that wouldn't impact the story very much. With the exception of the last few chapters, none of the scenes have the girls officially acting as a Beacon team, so there's no reason a friend couldn't be tagging along (rather like Penny and Sun's involvements at the end of season 1).

The pawns of good angels collide with the pawns of bad angels, along with demons and their pawnsYeah, I agree with you. It's rare to see demons and fallen angels in the same work. There are exceptions. The

[eurowatch]

'On that note, I'm interested (see Bile Fascination) to see how he'll respond to the seasons, as well as Violet's semblance.'
He has written a one-shot where another of his self-inserts saves Amber from Cinder and convinces her to give the Fall Maiden power back to the angel of fall (because angels do everything here). Not only does he manage to mangle what little characterisation Amber had, it also completely fails to make any Laura Bailey references (which should be a crime in its own right.)

I am actually interested in how he is going to handle the volume three ending in general considering what happens there. Even ProAJ should understand that his SI killing all the grimm and Cinder would radically chance the plot and give him nothing to work on. Right?

[beacon80]

My guess is he'll save Blake and Yang from Adam, but otherwise have no impact on the plot. I wouldn't be surprised if he talks (badgers) Blake into joining their expedition, despite how that would clearly cause problems in season 4.

it also completely fails to make any Laura Bailey references (which should be a crime in its own right.)
I'll admit that, despite admiring Laura Bailey, if there were references to her work in that scene, I missed them.

[fufuyurifan]

Late response, if only to respond about Velvet's Semblance;

He is salty as fuck. And he honestly throws a tantrum saying "My OC was doing it first dammit!"