Trouble

[meledea]

Title: Trouble
Rating: PG
Fandom/Pairing: Kobato (Fujimoto+Kobato)
(Personal) Challenge: Seasonal (Summer 2007/2008) -- Beer
Summary: Heat+Beer=?
Warnings: None really, except for crossover characters and possible under-age drinking (but that’s up for debate)
Author’s Notes: I am venturing into un-chartered territory here. I’m not really happy with it,

Comments

[selenityshiroi]

*flails from cuteness*

AWW!!! Fujimoto is so squishible! I adore him. Almost as much as Kobato, who makes my heart melt!

Adorable little fic!

[meledea]

Thanks!

[go0dlikdat]

Awww so cute! I loved it and thought it was really well written! It was also very in character too! Argh I wish Kobato chapters would come out with more pages...I really wanna know about the place she wants to go...

[meledea]

I theorise she is an angel. Kinda Wish-ish, but hey, it's my theory. She never takes off that damn hat!

Anyway, thanks for the feedback! Good to know I didn't butcher the characters.

[go0dlikdat]

I think so too! There are so many signs pointing to it. But then again you'd never know with CLAMP =)

[tiljaunique]

Great story! And really Kobato style too! I can picture the scene as actually happening to those characters, it's very character-like.

Ioryogi's last expression was the best also xD

[l_lexuran]

This is so incredibly adorable! I think you've really captured their personalities well, especially Kobato! Fujimoto is just... so sweet! *squee* And Ioryogi's 'evil-look' was a nice touch to add.

[hikari_26]

This ficlet was just so squishably cute cute cute&hearts &hearts &hearts

And that last sentence made me smile. :D