Fiction: checkin' it twice

Mar 15, 2011 17:34

Title: checkin' it twice
Rating/Warnings: T
Pairings: April/Andy
Disclaimer: It's a rental.
Summary: I want to treat April like a queen, and queens deserve flowers… and massages. Chocolate. Booze. Diamonds, rubies, emeralds. Treasure chests - full of scarves! Different kinds of lubes that warm up when you rub ‘em on stuff!

A/N: Prompted by the ( Read more... )

fiction: this could be my hoover dam

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peasantings March 15 2011, 22:10:19 UTC
I am speechless with love and adoration.

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middle_cyclone, thank you for prompting this, because this is beautiful.

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P.S. You totally nailed Andy Dwyer's characterization in my opinion. NAILED IT, MAURA.

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fujiidom March 16 2011, 18:23:31 UTC
Uh, I love you and am so flattered by this. He skates the line between doofy and adorable, so I'm glad he didn't come off as annoyingly ramble-y as I thought he might! ♥

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middle_cyclone March 15 2011, 23:26:41 UTC
ASDJLASDJKLJL THIS FIC. IT IS GLORIOUS AND EVERYTHING I EVER WANTED.

Seriously, though, how did you manage to cram so much amazingness into one story? I was reading the whole thing with hearts in my eyes, letting out little shrieks of delight with every new item on the list. Leslie. And Ben. AND RON. I LOVED THE RON PART. OF COURSE HE MADE THE BOX IN HIS WOODWORKING SHOP. OF COURSE.

I don't even know what to say - this is exactly what I was thinking of with the prompt, and you fulfilled my expectations AND THEN SOME. It's hilarious, yet so sweet, and really shows how Andy may be a little clueless but only wants to make April happy. Your Andy is dead on, and I can totally picture all of his facial expressions, and it makes me want to squish his cheeks. You included so many things I love about the show, and about Andy and April, and it's now my head canon that all of this was totally happening while everyone was busy planning the Harvest Festival.

When he finishes with his original list, he spends the whole day making another one. ( ... )

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fujiidom March 16 2011, 18:25:55 UTC
I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU LIKED IT.

I was debating whether or not to go super sappy throughout this, but even though I don't normally write anything so straight-up fluffy, I think that's Andy's whole existence. SO I COULDN'T AVOID IT.

I'm so glad you like it and the little drops I added about the other characters. (I am writing Leslie/Ben in this same 'verse, so hopefully that'll come out halfway decent!)

I LOVE YOU AND THANK YOU AGAIN FOR DONATING AND BEING GENERALLY AMAZING.

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michellek March 16 2011, 00:51:47 UTC
D'aaaaw/yay, this was awesome.

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fujiidom March 16 2011, 18:26:36 UTC
D'aww right back, for you thinking that. ♥

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cypanache March 16 2011, 02:27:49 UTC
Oh I love this! I love Andy's thought process (because this would so be his thought process), and Ron's continued non-involved involvement. And just you know . . . everything. Sighs happily.

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fujiidom March 16 2011, 18:28:07 UTC
THANK YOU. I'm so happy you liked it. :D

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dragonzair March 16 2011, 06:02:04 UTC
Oh my God. Your Andy-voice is PERFEECTTTTTTT. So many moments, if not all, in this fic made me squee with delight.

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fujiidom March 16 2011, 18:28:38 UTC
ACK, THANK YOU. He is hard to write and I'm so glad it worked for you. ♥

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