Fiction: Take A Ch-Ch-Ch-Chance

Apr 19, 2011 05:34

Title: Take A Ch-Ch-Ch-Chance
Rating/Warnings: T
Pairings: Ben/Leslie
Disclaimer: It's a rental.
Summary: Leslie throws Ben a birthday party. He's not the only one surprised.

A/N: Prompted by the generous shornt for help_japan. Thank you for your patience with my crazy schedule! Also, major thanks to my life hero, weasleytook for the a once over.

2,250ish words )

fiction: this could be my hoover dam

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forgetregret009 April 19 2011, 23:42:16 UTC
Awww that was lovely on all levels! I really loved the part about the Doctor Who cake- Ben's nerdiness/geekiness knows no bounds. You really write well in-character to the point where you can actually imagine these character's perspectives... and the reader can imagine this happening in the show! ♥♥♥♥

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fujiidom April 20 2011, 23:26:34 UTC
Thank you! His geekiness is one of my favorite things about him. ♥!

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fnasfhiulfshdiufnadskjbni anonymous April 20 2011, 02:32:58 UTC
Parks and Rec AND Doctor Who in one story?!? Be still my nerdy heart! LOVED IT.

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fujiidom April 20 2011, 23:26:52 UTC
THANK YOU!

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black_panda_ops April 20 2011, 02:42:08 UTC
Cute story. Enjoyed LeslieKs AOL speach. Loved Ron.

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fujiidom April 21 2011, 00:16:56 UTC
Thank you! :D

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cmdr_jade April 20 2011, 03:03:25 UTC
I never wanted this to end! SO super cute! I really loved Chris's "Yes, of course I know Ann" and LOVED that Ron was the one to interrupt them. Really, really great job!

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fujiidom April 21 2011, 00:21:53 UTC
Hee, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

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ballroom_pink April 20 2011, 04:01:46 UTC
I’d very much like to start calling dibs on what’s to be mine.”

Great Ron line. Classic.

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fujiidom April 21 2011, 00:22:51 UTC
THANK YOU! I'm flattered you thought I did him any justice, it's hard writing for characters you never have before! ♥

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