And Taemin. Taemin was so.... cute... So painfully... cute......... I was squinting all the way through this bc I'm sure you did it on purpose. You wanted my heart to ache and you used your strongest weapon against me. Touchée, my friend. He just smiled and nodded and played with the puppies and talked about flowers and my heart ached. Whenever he was just "hahaha idk anything about myself that's funny" I felt :/ and when Kai also felt :/ I FELT :( pinches nose. I did find him kinda useless in The Mission but it was good because The Mission was kind of a secret and it turns out he's a cyborg and has magic DNA so he's pretty Useful, he saved Kai's ass, so that's good. Ensuring a happy ending makes people useful in my book. THAT PART WHERE HE WAS SHOT DOWN I WAS JUST SO. That was so unnecessarily sad, I felt so betrAYED, but then everything turned out well. So good
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i loved this SO much ;_; i read it in two sittings before going to bed so i didn't jot down quotes like i'm in the habit of doing, which i regret now that i see you only received one other comment, because this story is one of the funniest and most refreshing that i've read in ages. i've watched some of cowboy bebop, enough that i clued in it was set in that universe as i reached the jack n jill portion (i usually save the author's notes for last, to go in with a fresh mind), and it was such a lovely surprise because i adore the energy and quirkiness of that show (sideline: have you watched space dandy? if yes, how did you enjoy that show?). ravi and kai beating each other up with so few apprehensions made me grin, and i liked that you didn't shy away from blood and injuries, and yet had them remain largely without consequences. that really set this story apart for me, it lent a gritty edge to a still cute universe
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EHE OHO I'M SORRY? OR AM I B) HEY MOONRAVI IS A RLY COOL SHIP NAME??? i hope these two at least know each other irl or something
oh my god N is tweaking ppl's mind to give himself fic cameos pass it forward in that note i was about to say "N should be friends with taekaietc." but i don't think they can handle it IM SORRY IT WAS ME WHO TRIED TO TRICK YOU WITH THAT MUMMIFICATION BULLSHIT IT WAS ME ALL ALONG also i just noticed that was supposed to be adventures IN space probably? hm im sorry for making you cry but im also secretly glad... sorry again...
thank you so so much for this comment it made my heart sing uwu much love to you too ♥♥♥
HELLO HERE WE ARE AT THE END OF THIS LONG JOURNEY yo giving someone your liver is a pretty valid demonstration of affection imo YES DOGS similarly to cowboy bebop the dogs are the smartest characters idk dude an increase in your value is always a thing to celebrate i think....? also timo couldn't possibly not run away he is a Free Spirit (n he got a debt to pay off)
IM REALLY GLAD YOURE COMMENTNG ON THE ALMOST SMUT SCENE BC TO ME IT LOOKED SO....... AWKWARD IN THERE I WAS LIKE SHIT I HECKED UP THANK YOU i did my best i swear i did thank you
once again i did think of a sequel to this... but... like........ about... timo..... and ravi............ im trash....... regardless of me being trash or not, thank you so so much for reading and commenting!! your comments made my day(s) and you are lovely ♥♥ thank you!!
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HEY MOONRAVI IS A RLY COOL SHIP NAME??? i hope these two at least know each other irl or something
oh my god N is tweaking ppl's mind to give himself fic cameos pass it forward
in that note i was about to say "N should be friends with taekaietc." but i don't think they can handle it
IM SORRY IT WAS ME WHO TRIED TO TRICK YOU WITH THAT MUMMIFICATION BULLSHIT IT WAS ME ALL ALONG
also i just noticed that was supposed to be adventures IN space probably? hm
im sorry for making you cry but im also secretly glad... sorry again...
thank you so so much for this comment it made my heart sing uwu much love to you too ♥♥♥
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yo giving someone your liver is a pretty valid demonstration of affection imo
YES DOGS similarly to cowboy bebop the dogs are the smartest characters
idk dude an increase in your value is always a thing to celebrate i think....?
also timo couldn't possibly not run away he is a Free Spirit (n he got a debt to pay off)
IM REALLY GLAD YOURE COMMENTNG ON THE ALMOST SMUT SCENE BC TO ME IT LOOKED SO....... AWKWARD IN THERE
I WAS LIKE SHIT I HECKED UP
THANK YOU
i did my best
i swear i did
thank you
once again i did think of a sequel to this... but... like........ about... timo..... and ravi............ im trash.......
regardless of me being trash or not, thank you so so much for reading and commenting!! your comments made my day(s) and you are lovely ♥♥ thank you!!
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