It's a Date.

[fulip]

Title: It's a Date [1/?]
Author: fulip
Pairing: Kakashi/Iruka
Rating: PG for now. NC-17 in later chapters.
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. Or Kakashi or Iruka which saddens me.
Summary: Kakashi lacks the social skills needed on a date apparently. And just what should a blind date entail?
Authors Notes: This is utter toss. I had a good idea and then it

Comments

[shini_chii]

“You make me nervous. I get quiet and hostile when I’m nervous” Kakashi stated simply.
♥!!
For a second I feared Kakashi kissed him because he was supposed to or something like that, lol.

And this line “I never have coffee on a first date” was the best!

Do I see Kaname and Momomi in that icon? *squeals*

[fulip]

Haha, thank you for the comment! Bless Kakashi, he doesn't know how to act when he gets nervous :]

It is Kaname and Momomi! *joins in the squealing* I have an incredibly soft spot for Kaname... actually I fancy her rotten haha. Mmm. Love Strawberry Panic! Kaname + bath = love. Lol.

[fulip]

Also, if you've seen Strawberry Panic [and feel the need to fill 5 minutes of your time because its really not that exciting lol] check out the entry before this in my journal. The tiniest review of SP ever lol! ♥

[ladyfiction]

I recognized your name from somewhere...it's bothering me. I can't think of from where. I doubt it's from this comm...hmmm...well, while I ponder this, I'd just like to say that the read was thoroughly enjoyable. The style was clever and very playful. So far, I believe that both characters are truly, as we say, IC. The vocabulary is varied, which is always a nice touch and the beginning (as in with Genma, and the chapter as a whole) was smooth and posesses an eloquent flow. My only complaint, is the word meandering, which is a gorgeous word, but because it is so rare, its repetition is blatant, and it was used so close to the first time. I know, that's a little nitpicky of me, sorry- I tend to do that

[fulip]

Ooo, I'm not sure where you might've recognised my name from O.o Umm... I've written a couple of things for the KakaIru community but other than that I'm not sure, haven't used this journal for posting other stuff. Hopefully you recognized it for a good reason!

Ahh thank you so much for the review, it made my day. I'm glad that you think they are both IC, I was worried about that and it may deviate a little in later chapters but hopefully not too much. No need to apologize about nitpicking :] I'm glad you pointed it out, re-reading it I realized that I used it twice in close succession and I think you're right about it sticking out. I'll try to steer away from that in future. And I changed the spacing between the lines you pointed out which does work better, thank you for noticing that.

Thank you so much for your kind words. This idea just popped into my head so I ran with it but I'm glad people are enjoying it thus far. I really appreciate the detailed comment :] Thank you.

More soon!

[silkenelephants]

I love it! It's funny and sweet. I was getting really annoyed with Kakashi when they were eating ramen but there was a reason for all that! :) Great job on this one, can't wait until the second date! :)

[fulip]

Haha don't be too harsh on Kakashi... he lacks the social skills needed to seduce the one he loves ;]

More coming soon! Thank you for the comment :]

[random_hato]

" I get quiet and hostile when I'm nervous."

don't we all XD this was adorable and i wavered between wanting to squeal in fangirl glee and wanting to smack kakashi upside the head ( genma had the right idea )

can't wait for the second date :)

[fulip]

Haha leave it to Genma to know how to sort it ;] Thank you very much for taking the time to comment. More will be coming today hopefully!

[luna2k]

yay loved it! kakashi is adorable ^^
keep up with the good work!
cant wait for the second date :)

[fulip]

Thank you! Kakashi bless him, he is adorable. He just doesn't know how to act. So of course he falls to throwing himself at Iruka at the end. If all else fails hehe. More soon!