Gah! Canon!Sue!

[fullmetalsues]

I took everyone off my friend's list, except for the other Sue Reports and the comms. please don't be offended, it was only because my Friend's page was getting too cluttered, and i kept the Sue Reports for inspiration.. and the comm's... i don't know. They're actually the ones clogging me up. Will have to do something about that

Comments

[dragonalchemist]

The only thing I can see that gives this fic ANY standing above a four is:

“Wow Riza nice-” Roy was cut off by the book that hit him in the face.

Unfortunately, it's ruined by the fact that Roy calls her "Riza" and by the fact that they're obviously not in a bookstore.

*+53 to book materialization* >>

[angathol]

XD

+40 to "rape of the English language" power

[angathol]

This... is terrible. If my FF.net account was still valid, I'd flame the shit out of this fic.

[havocmangawip]

OMFG. DIES.

I'm surprised that this person was able to READ to find the POST button to spew this stuff out onto the internet.

BLECH.

[meowkittykat986]

._.

I don't think I can find any words to describe how much I pain for Riza.

[umi_mikazuki]

Riza is NOT a mallrat, or a valley girl. She does not giggle. She does not force or ask men to check her out in new outfits.

This suethor needs to DIE. OH SO HORRIBLY.