Too Cute For Crime

[fullmotor]

I've been working on the latest draft of Criminal Element, the inevitable beta playtest document thingie, which I'm calling the "Shotgun Bible".  I'm calling it the Shotgun Bible because a) I want to have a name for the beta that isn't "beta playtest" and b) it's a cool fucking name.

Anyway, I've got a particular way of writing, especially when it

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[macklinr]

Agreed. The first sentence alone is punchy. It's "big print on back cover" punchy.

[drivingblind]

A heist is like geometry, all full of angles.

To make it out whole, you've got to understand the mathematics of crime.

[fullmotor]

Ooooooh. You are good, Fred. That's tasty.