Comments | fullof_grace: stay the same // simon&alisha fic

fullof_grace

stay the same // simon&alisha fic

Jan 12, 2011 21:57

title: stay the same
pairing/characters: Simon/Alisha, Alisha POV
rating: PG. Mentions of death
word count: 1989
a/n: my first WHOLE fic in about, two-three years. Oh my god, I'm pretty sure it's complete, un-beta'd crap. ~is nervous
summary: you think you're surprised? imagine being me. fic follows simon/alisha till they end up together

( It's always the weird, quiet kid that takes a gun and shoots up the place )

ship:simon/alisha, tv:misfits

Comments 25

thefrug January 13 2011, 09:30:01 UTC

My favorite part definitely has to be the pub scene. I hope we get scenes like this in series 3! great job! <3

fullof_grace January 14 2011, 02:12:56 UTC

i hope so too. i understand they need to push plots forward, but it sucks we missed out on their budding relationship.

thanks for commenting!

guffi10 January 13 2011, 12:21:03 UTC

I loved it.

fullof_grace January 14 2011, 02:13:13 UTC

♥ thanks!!

gabilu January 13 2011, 14:43:19 UTC

It isn't crap at all! Loved all the details. They made this one-shoot feel very real.

Thinking about Simon opening up to Alisha is something very nice. It's something he would do after he knows she's a true friend of his. A scene like this, or something about Present!Simon and Present!Alisha getting to know each other is what I need. Don't wanna think she will always love another version of him... But, was you said: She still wants to be with him. Still loves him, just differently. I have faith in them.

fullof_grace January 14 2011, 02:17:39 UTC

ha thanks! first fic in a very long time so I'm glad that people enjoyed. makes my heart grow!

& like i said earlier, I don't like that we didnt get to see him opening up to her. He's still insecure, as we seen on the show, so I'd love to see more scenes of them opening up to one another.

jennhunt January 13 2011, 14:51:08 UTC

Love it!

fullof_grace January 14 2011, 02:18:00 UTC

♥ ♥ thanks for commenting!

stainofmylove January 13 2011, 14:57:21 UTC

This is lovely. I really like how angry Alisha is here (not just heartbroken), for example when she thinks: She finds herself a little angry that he doesn't stick up for himself more and she rarely joins in on the laughter. I think that's very, very believable. Definitely something I can understand. Also love the addition of his camera phone in the Superhoodie reveal--that's brilliant. Creepy, but sorta sweet--just like Simon, lol. Love it.

fullof_grace January 14 2011, 02:20:44 UTC

♥ ha thanks so much! the only way i could see simon finding out is if he followed her, like before Curtis hit the reset button. Plus, I like the idea of her embracing something sort of weird that he used to do.

btw, i totally think he only stopped filimg everything because of what happened with Sally, not Nathan making fun.