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[FIC] Reality in Fiction

Jan 11, 2009 05:36

Title: Reality in Fiction
Author: aislinoriel
Rating: R (strong language)
Summary: Jaejoong-centric. The progression of the end of a friendship. Yunjae/Jaeho.
Genre: Angst/Romance
Characters: Jaejoong/Yunho
Author Notes: (Un-spellchecked, please correct any mistakes.) Be gentle. This is actually my story. I tried but I didn't get the happy ending. ;_;

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fanfic, pairing: jaejoong/yunho

Comments 29

dzertva_x January 11 2009, 19:16:21 UTC

It's been a while since a story has really made me feel the way yours has. I love happy endings as much as the next person, but reality isn't a fairy tale and you capture that so beautifully. I don't know you, but I'm so sorry this happened to you...Life is full of heart breaks, and I hope you have found or will find true happiness with a loved one.

fullofwishes January 11 2009, 23:14:40 UTC

Ah, that's the kind of compliment that I take to heart, I know for me it's hard for writing to make me feel much of anything, so you humble me. ^///^
Don't be sorry. Ah, it's was much my own doing, I was horrible, even if I don't think it was entirely justified to end the way it did. But I look at it this way, at least I got some good angsty fic out of the whole ordeal! ;_;
Thanks for reading, and your kind words. True happiness is all we can ever hope for. &hearts

dzertva_x January 12 2009, 16:22:18 UTC

I had something to type here, but then I left to make a pot of tea and now I completely forget what I wanted to say. I hate when this happens :c

But, I do hope you continue writing and sharing your works with us. I enjoy your style~

shinchul303 January 12 2009, 00:57:32 UTC

This story was a refreshing change of pace. I can't say a delightful change of pace, but more real than a lot. And in the context of your story, I think Jae was a fucking shithead here, particularly his post-breakup “You should have just given it time. You don't...know” WAY after the fact. He deserves every payback Yunho can give him. And the beauty of it is Yunho isn't even giving him that--he's honestly moved on.

"Yunho had looked at him. He looked right through him."

Crushing hearts is a very dangerous business. What goes around comes around.

fullofwishes January 12 2009, 01:13:54 UTC

You know it. And I know it. And ouch. But correct.

Serious business. I should have a degree. Thanks for reading and your comment.

shinchul303 January 12 2009, 01:26:55 UTC

duh--forgot the most important thing here:

Really SUPERB writing!

And, dare I say it (for god's sake shut up already!)...

*love's a no holds barred, take-no-prisoners bitch*

fullofwishes January 12 2009, 01:43:41 UTC

LULZ.

TY, you make me giggle. &hearts

I was slightly mortified for a moment. *KEEP LOVE FAR AWAY FROM ME* D:

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ara_niey January 13 2009, 01:55:42 UTC

*sigh*

i don't know who to blame..but i guess jae kinda deserved that treatment from yun..i mean,ven if he was not prepared of yun's confession,he didn't have to turn him down like that..tsk.

fullofwishes January 13 2009, 06:43:51 UTC

From experience I can say that people rarely say the right thing in a tough situation like that. Unfortunate. But sometimes it seems crueler not turning someone down from the start and leaving them wondering/with false hope. (When you don't really know your own feelings it makes it all the more unfortunate.) Tsk indeed.

Thank you for reading! ^^

f_i_x_m_e January 18 2009, 18:01:09 UTC

I was stalking your journal since were soulmates (<33)

THIS MADE ME CRYYYYY!
So sad!
But you're an amazing writer!

fullofwishes January 18 2009, 20:23:29 UTC

*wibbles* :3

I'M SORRY BB~ *passes tissues*
It's sad shit, I know. But I promise fluffy, smutty goodness soon. ^^
TY! &hearts

alex202 February 25 2009, 04:27:21 UTC

I really liked it !! After reading this , the first thing crossed my mind that JJ deserved this . He used to have Yun's love but now he lost . Once you lost something , it may never come back to you again ~ .

"He looked at him. He looked right through him,"

It begins and ends with this sentence , like a bullet shot right through my heart ... They are over ~

I read this fic a long time ago but i forgot to leave my reply :P Im sorry :P

fullofwishes February 25 2009, 05:58:28 UTC

Yeah, I guess it's hard to feel sorry for Jae. But everyone must remember that he didn't have the luxury to be so sure of his feelings at the start like Yunho, and he acted while confused. Though stupidly. So he probably did get just what he deserved. -_-
Pretty final, isn't it?

No worries, thanks for your comment now! ^^