Fic: All of Me

[fullyajar]

“Read another one!” Brittany exclaims, doing another effortless backflip and making Santana’s body bounce on the trampoline.

“Okay,” Santana says with a laugh when the trampoline vibrates under her. She tightens her grip on her magazine when she bounces up and down. “Here’s one: Dear Peggy, I’m the oldest of five siblings and the only girl. My

Comments

[videlicet90]

Wow, this was really amazing. Very tender and sweet! I loved it. =)

[fullyajar]

Yay, first review! :) Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

[quirkykoala]

This is fantastic. Brittany being her normal self and not questioning anything she's feeling and Santana being totally guarded at first and worry about everyone else. Totally in character, I could see this happening in the show.

[fullyajar]

*blushes* Thanks so much! This would be almost canon in my mind as well if I hadn't read so many other wonderful fics about their first time. I wanted to give it a shot (and fill the GKM prompt), and I'm really happy people seem to like it! Thanks for the review!

[tricaltra]

This is very well written and the characterization is spot on. It nicely captures both the emotional and physical aspects of their relationship. Nicely done.

[fullyajar]

Ooo, yay, I'm really happy to hear that, because I spent a lot of effort trying to do these two great characters justice! :) Thanks for the read and the review!

[patmik]

Wow... just wow... I haven't read a good Brittana smut in a looong time, and by good, I mean that is has a right amount of smut and fluff and the smut doesn't seem rushed, and both of them were shy for their first time, and then experiencing it together for the first time, and coming together and exchange their "I love you's". This is amazing!

[fullyajar]

I've also noticed that some smut tends to be a bit rushed, but I did my research (haha, it was NOT a chore) and kind of copied how the better Brittana writers do it. I've never combined smut and fluff before though, so I'm happy to hear it worked! Thanks so much!

[korthansus]

This is so wonderful! It's so well written with the perfect mixture of sweetness and drama. The sexual parts were very well done, but always kept a really romantic/tender feel to them. Great work :D Maybe you'll consider a sequel...?!

[fullyajar]

I think any Brittana story I ever write could be a sequel to this! I've written one other so far: Patience

Thanks for the review and wonderful praise! :)