Comments | fullyajar: Fic: Dolphins and Mermaids (Part 2/2)

fullyajar

Fic: Dolphins and Mermaids (Part 2/2)

Aug 02, 2011 18:38

It took another hour before Brittany tired of the teasing. Santana continued to squirm in her seat, avoiding looking at Brittany as best as she could, but Brittany wasn’t immune to her own teasing either. Her skin burned to be touched, and she continued to swim, hoping the cold water would dampen her own arousal. Images of them together kept ( Read more... )

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cherrylipsgirl August 3 2011, 09:19:38 UTC

Oh hell, you deliver time after time. Can I ask you something (you're Dutch right?) - do you know if there's an equivalent of salt water taffee in the Dutch speaking world?

fullyajar August 3 2011, 15:38:31 UTC

I don't think so, actually - I think you just call them salt water taffees. Or you can make up your own translation - zout water toffee, hehe.

Thanks for the praise!

tricaltra August 4 2011, 11:40:41 UTC

Hot yet tender at the same time. Excellent piece of writing.

fullyajar August 5 2011, 19:14:12 UTC

Thank you! I'm very grateful you always leave reviews, it makes me smile. :)

ducksticks August 14 2011, 02:25:42 UTC

WOW! I'm on the south side of the Earth, so there is a chilly winter at this time over here, but DAMN! I get hot just reading this. Even I fancied a popsicle =P

I love when you write smut my friend, so keep doing it! ;)

fullyajar August 14 2011, 09:20:46 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad I was able to give you some of the Northern hemisphere feverish summer feeling! I'll keep writing, no worries! :D

starsplit144 August 26 2011, 20:02:38 UTC

Always enough hot. Holy shit. Gah, can you just write Glee. Or kidnap Naya and Heather and write that spinoff....or, you know, just keep writing this all the time. Cold shower. Now. Or cold ocean. Something.

fullyajar August 27 2011, 09:13:26 UTC

Haha, thanks! I'd love to write Glee, I thought you'd never ask! If I stick to this... ahem... style, though, I think it'll turn out more like True Blood (without the blood) than Glee... :P

Thanks for the praise! I'm glad you liked it!

fruitkitten September 4 2011, 19:29:49 UTC

thanks for another super hot brittana fic. loved all the teasing! it was just enough.

since you asked for suggestions, i'll give you one: maybe more physical detail and fewer euphemisms in the sex scenes.

fullyajar September 5 2011, 16:34:44 UTC

I'm glad you liked the teasing! :D Thanks for the suggestion as well! I don't want my smut getting too trite, haha. I'll watch for it in the future.

Thanks for the review!