Under The Wired

Dec 08, 2004 13:43

I started to write a story not long ago and although writing is not my strong point, I seem to enjoy reading this if I do say so myself ( Read more... )

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dexter_collins December 8 2004, 04:40:23 UTC
You finished the story!!! Jamie that's wonderful!

Wow I have have so many thoughts on this. The depth of detail without description reminds me of Brian Aldiss, the British author of "Supertoys Last All Summer Long". I loved that the date was the...

he twenty fifth day, of the seventh month in the year of two thousand and four... that hearts, minds and souls belonging to the human being became tools, numbers, viral documents and items of possession....that's one day before my birthday!!! But the idea of a second Watershed - incredible! (or actually, strangely credible, considering Watershed occured sometime in July, 1969, when the information-handling capacity of all computers exceeded that of the human population ( ... )

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Hmmmm fulysikm8 December 9 2004, 03:10:05 UTC
You have such inner theories my dear Dexter, as I said, my interpretation skills are not that polished and my mind was altered the day those words were typed, but I think I will stick to hairdressing for Novelist doesn't seem to fit in my resume.

But thank you for your input

xoxo

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Re: Hmmmm dexter_collins December 9 2004, 13:50:37 UTC

It isn't my input; everything I thought is
there in what you wrote.

I don't just 'talk up' people I care for.

I promise you I have never enjoyed the work of -

a friend,
of a lover,
of a guy so darn sexy that for every night of last week
I've dreamt
of waking the next morning
alongside you, moments before
you open your eyes,
so I can be the first
of us to smile.

- as much I enjoyed "Under The Wired".

So, a challenge to prove your story is pretty darn good [and to verify all I've said above]: Give your story to me.

I don't mean change the name on it or anything; just allow me to act on your behalf.

I'll have it in print by the end of March.

Yours

completely,
exclusively,
falangie-ly

Dexter C D Collins

(no kiss. I'm saving-them-up to give to you in person)

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