I guess I'll give you the third and fourth a le meme temps.

[fun_fancy_free]

Chapitre Trois

"So, have ya ever worked on a farm before Trisha? I mean, I know you didn't live on a farm, but you
rode, and so I was thinking maybe you had done some of this stuff before maybe," Tim asked
"Um, no, not really." Trisha replied.
"Ah, okay, well, I think maybe we'll take a ride on the tractor first, the hay is pretty well done, and
so I

Comments

[musicaltwin07]

I liked it.
Question. Did you base that mall off of a real mall? If so, I need to go there. lol

[fun_fancy_free]

I totally did. The West Edmonton Mall. Go. It's AMAZING!

[his_ryanness]

Ah, you're taking me back to the Alberta trip. That was a fun week.

[fun_fancy_free]

Ahaha.. yeah... my friend asked me if that was a real mall, and I'm like.. ahh... fun times at the WEM!!

[his_ryanness]

Oh yeah, almost forgot.
"Ah. What happened to the cows and chickens?"
"We ate 'em all."
"Oh."
"Yeah."
I laughed at this.

[17_ally_17]

Yes, I am amazing. Is it good so far?

[his_ryanness]

If I were reading it in print I'd say it seriously lacks polish, but since what you're giving me is a kind of first draft, I think it's quite good.

Of course, you'll have to forgive me if I truly reserve judgement until I read a little more ;)

[17_ally_17]

Yip Yip. Very rough copy. Unedited even by myself. LOL

Sweeeeeet. Ahaha