the last resort - chapter 1

Jan 06, 2008 21:40


A/N This is not as polished as I wanted to be, but I found this story wandering into so many directions so I wanted to keep it on track before it ran away from me entirely.
And this is the result. Good or bad. You be the judge.

I hope you enjoy this. Comments are <333

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the last resort, jaeho, chapter 1

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cereza_gakuto January 7 2008, 17:43:49 UTC
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YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

O-O
YunHo have a wifey? .____.
OMFGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!

wahhh
jaecito :(
poor thing ;__;

aish!

I liked it!

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fundamental_lov January 8 2008, 02:32:00 UTC
haha... no Yunnie does have a mom though who works in the facilities.
sorry for the imminent confusion. ><

And I feel bad for Jae too...
It feels difficult to write it at times.
But you'll see how this will turn out. ^^

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milena_1980 January 7 2008, 20:12:11 UTC
This continues to look more and more interesting. What exactly is Jaejoong's illness? Can he be cured? So many questions...

I love how you describe spaces and objects, it feels very realistic.

I'm really loving this, and can't wait to see more :D

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fundamental_lov January 8 2008, 02:36:50 UTC
thank you for noticing my dabble with reality. It seemed difficult to grasp, but I'm so glad that it's working. :]

Jaejoong's illness is as of now unconfirmed, but you'll know about it in due time.
About a cure... it may be possible... maybe not.

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ara_niey January 9 2008, 11:17:33 UTC
oh?yunnie's mother is the receptionist?
hmm..but yunnie's not in that institution right?
but..
'The receptionist held up the photograph of her son and turned it gently face-down on the desk.'
why would she do that?o.O

hmm..sibling abused?
what's ADHD and Schizophrenia?if that's not too much to ask..sorry..i'm too lazy to look up for the meanings..haha~^_^

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fundamental_lov January 10 2008, 21:56:08 UTC
you raise up so many interesting pertinent questions... I'm afraid I could only answer some of them.. without giving too much up, I hope.
Thank you for reading closely though! :]

About Yunnie and his mother... no comment for now. x_x
It'll get clearer soon. But its secret-ish.

Sibling abused... or sibling abuser.
Jaejoong's family refused to believe that he was not normal in either way. So naturally a lot of conflicts and even behavioral issues emerged.

ADHD is Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder. I actually think I should have put ADD there (same but without the hyperactivity) since Jae is always so zoned out. x_x *gets shot*
Schizophrenia is a disease when the mind is warped into believing that things which do not exist are real. Kind of like the movie Beautiful Mind if you've ever watched that.

You'll soon know what his illness is.

I'm sorry if I'm so vague in my answers. T_T

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ara_niey January 10 2008, 22:28:08 UTC
ahhh~thank you so much for your explanation..sorry if i took your time in replying my comment..

about yunnie and his mom..i guess i'll just wait then..haha!!~^_^

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fundamental_lov January 10 2008, 22:48:21 UTC
No problem!! :]
It's my pleasure when people care about my story as much as to ask questions. ^^

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