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Moments (Andros/Ashley)

Jan 14, 2009 01:27

Title: Moments (Or, “Andros and Ashley Eat Cookies and Otherwise Act Totally PG Because I'm Lazy and They're Uncooperative”! :D)
Season: PRiS
Rating: PG(! This was supposed to be, like, so not PG.)
Summary: Um. Well... there's Ashley and Andros, and talking, and Ashley thinks a lot during the talking, and then they get a call, and then they sit on ( Read more... )

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Wee! Comment of *Love* ♥♥ (AKA 'in need of sleep like WOAH') lunaria_kitty January 14 2009, 10:51:35 UTC

Aww! LOVE! And this isn't nothing, it's a day in the life! ...Of a story I SO wanna read. -Grins innocently- I think I almost like the soap-opera daily life thing better than set, structured story fic. It makes me think of First, which makes me happy. ^_ ( ... )

Re: Wee! Comment of *Love* ♥♥ (AKA 'in need of sleep like WOAH') rosabelle January 14 2009, 11:44:43 UTC

*squees back at you* SLEEP DEPRIVATION IS FUN, YO.

I'm a big fan of random moments. PLOT IS HARD, OKAY. I prefer characters to plot, but I have a hard time writing character-driven fic for a sustained period of time. The plot takes over and I get excited about it, and then I forget about all the character development that was supposed to happen for the plot to even make sense, and oops, what's that subplot doing in here, and wait, this person has too many identities!

Dude! First! That's not the first time someone's said that to me, either. *considers* I guess I don't see it, except that we happen to be writing about the same characters, but I'll take it. *squees so hard*

*laughs* I know! This is why I never write anything else. I've started so many stories with different relationships (hell, even different people), and after a few minutes I start thinking, "Andros and Ashley are way cute together. I think I'll go write more about them". (Woo! Tangent! I've always found canon!Ashley to be kind of irritating. Even when I was a ( ... )

Re: Wee! Comment of *Love* ♥♥ (AKA 'in need of sleep like WOAH') lunaria_kitty January 14 2009, 12:51:47 UTC

YES. Though I am a little more -handwaves- here, now that I've had my shower. It woke me up some. -Needs coffee though-

Me too! Random moments are the BEST! ♥ Plot *is* hard! (-Laughs- Apparently I'm just going to repeat everything back to you.) But it's true though! Sometimes I wait around for 5-6 pages for the plot to fall in somewhere, but IT DOESN'T. -Giggles- ...Oops? -Laughs- I so need to write more, I have no clue where I stand on this.

Yes First, you write alot like Star imo. It's your grasp of the characters and the way you interpret and write them, I think. Either way, you'z both amazing ( ... )

Re: Wee! Comment of *Love* ♥♥ (AKA 'in need of sleep like WOAH') rosabelle January 14 2009, 13:09:17 UTC

I don't think it was the cheerleader thing that bothered me. *frowns* But I've seen, like, five episodes of Turbo, so. I couldn't say. Though it might have been that so much of her character was "cheerleader"... Hmm. This might be what I didn't like about Carlos, either. Cassie and TJ I couldn't tell you about, because like I said. Five episodes, and they weren't in three of them. ^_ ( ... )

signkat January 14 2009, 18:05:44 UTC

OMG - LOVE IT!!!! I certainly have to agree, random moments are the best!

will have to comment more later, my lunch break is over.

rosabelle January 15 2009, 00:31:33 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! :D

signkat January 15 2009, 04:42:06 UTC

Must agree that fandom Ashley is always better than Peppy Cheerleader Ashley, any day!!
I liked how you slipped the kittens in there too! I do have to agree w/ Challon though - I SO would love to read the rest of this story too! Or at least a few more "day in the life" glimpses of Ashley & Andros' life on KO-35!!! :-D