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(Fic) The Lovesong of Echizen Ryoma (Part 1) -- For poilass

Apr 29, 2012 18:08

Title: The Lovesong of Echizen Ryoma (Part 1)
Recipient's Name: poilass
Author: whisper132
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 14,505
Pairing: a somewhat turbulent wave of Kaidou/Echizen, a heavy dash of Inui/Fuji
Author's Notes: I was really fortunate to get your festival of prompts. I hope this meets with your approval. I tried to work in as many of your prompt ( Read more... )

Comments 3

perkyandproud April 29 2012, 10:19:53 UTC

I need to write down my impressions as I read this I can see already ( ... )

whisper132 April 29 2012, 11:06:12 UTC

Inui and Fuji were supposed to be quiet side characters, but they sort of stole the show whenever they came in.

cellia April 30 2012, 23:33:25 UTC

lol this is a great Ryoma pov (dreams of glory! and ~doubles!). His plan and cockiness after he gets his feet back under him is awesome. And Momo's supportiveness! And Fuji and Inui!

I like how Karupin is also highly present.

Echizen was sure he saw Fuji-senpai looking down at them from his third year classroom, smiling every time a second year tripped and skidded across the wet court.

lol