I love this. I would say the second stanza is my favorite, but to do so would mean to exclude my other favorite parts, which, when added together, make up the whole poem.
These lines sizzle:
between the static buzz of jazz and words spoken slowly with a melismatic undertone
And this: listening to silences breaking
reminds me of hear the moving silence, which is a line from Stream, written by your father about your mother in 1978. :)
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also, you are one of the biggest-hearted people i know.
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These lines sizzle:
between the static buzz of jazz
and words spoken slowly
with a melismatic undertone
And this:
listening
to silences breaking
reminds me of hear the moving silence, which is a line from Stream, written by your father about your mother in 1978. :)
I love you.
x-ty o-sies,
Momzy
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