Hang on, this'll get rough.

Feb 02, 2009 18:42


Just a rough draft of a poem I've been working on.  Comment.  Or don't.


Hip-Hop and Hard Rock:

The two brothers who couldn’t stand each other

So they left swollen, purple

charlie-horse forget-me-nots

on the other’s shoulder

when Mom wasn’t looking.

Both are rooted in underground movements.

Both had to fight for their own survival.

Both were once illegal to be played in public.

Both made it to the main stream,

and both suffered because of it.

The same person who listens to

Soulja Boy & Little John

exclusively for the beat

Is the same person who listens to

Warrent & White Snake

for the guitar solo.

Honestly Hip-Hop,

you could learn so much from your older brother’s mistakes.

Yours was a violent and messy puberty.

L.A. still has the scars across her face

from when you popped store fronts like pimples,

your growth spurt was so sudden

that you still look awkward and off-balance

when you C-Walk by.

Your legs haven’t grown into your feet

and your feet haven’t caught up with your lungs

and your eyes haven’t grown into your lips

and your lips haven’t caught up with your tongues

The ones that hung masochistic synonyms

trading women for tricks

and love with hittin’ it.

Binging on blind idolatry

like you were the first one to do so.

Just ask Jimmy Hendrix,

Janice Joplin,

and Elvis

what success in excess will get you.

But sometimes,

in a country who’s musical sweet tooth is partial to

Bazooka Joe & Brittany Spears,

Whiskey & Weed

are the only way to wash the taste of bubble gum

from your mouth.
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