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[furthernovember]

Red lines splashed upon your face, Cowards sealed bottoms up in this tinted vase... Brush away your markings, kiss away your secrets, throw away your heartbeat, die right here in white lights. Someone call a surgeon for we need a scalpel, to gently rip out your lies... Doctor, its getting harder, Doctor, its getting lonely just to breathe. Open

Comments

[freeksh0w]

Hm. I likes it. I don't like the line that says, "Doctor, it's getting lonely just to breathe." The lonely should be harder. It would go with the sentence before it.. Or that's how I see it at least. Other than that, good job Kitty.

PS-I miss you. Me, you, Lauren and Dan maybe? Have to do something soon. Yeah.

It's Morris

[anonymous]

Gotta love it dude, the figurative really gets the job done. I love the die right here in white lights line. It's tight.