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Chapter Seven: An Unfortunate Reunion! The Bullets - and the Mafia - Begin to Fly!

Apr 15, 2010 16:03

CHAPTER SEVEN: An Unfortunate Reunion! The Bullets - and the Mafia - Begin to Fly!

Conan trained his wristwatch on the black-clad woman, just as Vermouth sighted at him with her pistol.

「Well, isn't this a coincidence, Cool Kid?」

「Vermouth. What are you doing here?」

( 「I have business with these two thieves,」 Vermouth replied casually )

haibara, vermouth, isaac, firo, maiza, czeslaw, miria, conan, berga, chapter: seven, ennis, luck

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skyechan April 15 2010, 23:46:35 UTC

Apologies for the lack of comments from me lately! Student teaching has kept me busy, but I finally caught up on the story. :)

Really love the direction the plot is heading (I wonder what the Black Organization has planned for our thieving duo?) and as usual your characterization of Issac and Miria is spot-on. :3 (That poor French embassy from the previous chapter... xD;; ) Only one little nit-pick: Conan's watch only contains one dart at a time. ^^;

furtivamentefic April 15 2010, 23:51:45 UTC

No worries! We completely understand being busy, this time of year!

I'm glad you like it so far, and I hope you continue to enjoy!

... does it only have one dart? Oh. Well, umm... maybe he got an upgrade. /hides plotholes behind a curtain

skyechan April 15 2010, 23:59:09 UTC

Works for me. xD;;

katty008 April 16 2010, 18:27:46 UTC

This has absolutely no potential to blow up in everyone's face, nuh-uh. And I'm sure Haibara is very very amused, uh-huh. Though I'm actually kind of scared about the okonomiyaki.

furtivamentefic April 18 2010, 00:43:55 UTC

It has absolutely no chance to go absolutely, horribly, ballistically wrong.

(Actually... it has just that chance. But hopefully it will go all wrong in the best of ways.)

Glad you are liking it!