Departure

[furtum_victus]

  "It is a simple matter of choice."

Her gentle tone drifts across the small chamber, intertwining with the steady echoed beat of water droplets randomly falling from the rough hewn sealing.  It is a soft blend, the sound of my daughter's voice mingled with the natural resonances of this resting place and yet the cold logic of her statement saps

Comments

[bridget_eden]

This is very very good writing! Beautiful. As with everything you write it leaves me wanting to know MORE - which is good.

[furtum_victus]

Thanks!

[lady_355]

I don't know the context, but this was amazing.

[furtum_victus]

I needed a reason for Brogan to go out of town while I was VST so I figured I'd spin up a reason for him to go and a fight with his mortal daughter seemed like a pretty good idea.

Also felt like droping a few hints of his back story :)

[locrianl33t]

I cannot *wait* for gotm.

[furtum_victus]

Neither can I! Should be a fun time :D

[pcharacter]

You are so full of BS when you're all like "I wanna be up to par..." :P

This was really good. Very nice use of emotion.

[furtum_victus]

Hey now, I've written some pretty horrible drivle, just most of it doesn't make it on here ;)

Thank you though, I was trying to convey how emotionally charged the event was

[angelsamael]

One of us! One of us!
(Fine piece man. It's good to see you writing again.)

[furtum_victus]

Hahaha! Yeah pretty much. That's a peak at 'The Amon Project'