I do this with great trepidation

[furyk]

Here's a poem (somewhat dark) that I wrote for a poetry workshop. Note, this does not make my journal like every other lame Livejournal that posts goth poetry, I swear! It could still use some work, but I'm pretty proud of it

Comments

[iluvikarishinji]

Someone missed their dose of antiemo pills. :(

[furyk]

Apocolypse is not emo.

[rantmaster_mark]

Soild and quite workable. Sadly, I'm not a fan of poems written outside the realm of iambec pentameter, but what you've done with this is quality otherwise.