Bye, Bye Miss American Pie

[furzicle]

Coby was wiped out. He pulled his soaked soccer jersey away from his body hoping for a little bit of cooling. He spotted three of his teammates sprawled like fallen logs on the grass in the shade under a gargantuan sycamore. Two of them, Nathan and Jonathan, hung their heads like spent racehorses.  The MVP of the game, Marco, lay on the grass

Comments

[banana_galaxy]

Oof. This packs a real punch. But I liked the way you focused on these issues from the perspective that you did.

[alycewilson]

Sad but true circumstances.

[dadi]

So sad :(