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fushicho_eien

The Cabin aka And I Told Him So

Sep 09, 2009 18:13

Okay, a bit of language, you know Al..
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“Greylace!”

Ah, yes, I have somehow managed to again annoy Alcibiades. The poor dear really needs to learn to control that temper of his, or he’ll end up having a heart attack, which would be bad for both of us.

And I think I know just the way to cheer him up.

Alcibiades ran into the room, eyes ( Read more... )

fanfiction, caius, alcibiades, shadow magic

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runeariala September 9 2009, 22:43:59 UTC

I know you said it wasn't betaed, but...tense issues with Caius going from speaking in first person present, to referring to Alcibades's actions in past tense.

Otherwise, very cute! I could imagine that such interactions would scandalize poor Yana. Better they have their own space...

fushicho_eien September 9 2009, 23:44:49 UTC

lol that's what happens when your writing is interrupted by bells, class and lunch..

I couldnt fix it for some reason.. it didnt feel right..

I love the last line, so Caius

linguabriana September 9 2009, 23:39:26 UTC

:D gives me butterflies

so cute

fushicho_eien September 9 2009, 23:45:38 UTC

aww thanks :D love your icon.. Hal/Roy ftw :D

fushicho_eien September 9 2009, 23:46:39 UTC

and OMG just looked at your page!! SHOEBOX QUOTE!!!!

I hugs you now :D

noisetteblanche September 11 2009, 23:26:49 UTC

This totally needs an R-rated sequel.

But aside from that, it was adorable, and I loved it.

fushicho_eien September 12 2009, 18:01:55 UTC

lol :D not really sure how to write it.. that was my idea, but.. well it doesnt really like me enough to come out of my pen yet :D

I'll see what I can do though :D

fushicho_eien September 16 2009, 20:54:40 UTC

the fic's here: http://fushicho-eien.livejournal.com/4108.html

hope you enjoy it :D

cienna September 17 2009, 01:06:33 UTC

Aww... that was adorable! *off to read the sequel*

ETA: Sorry, had to use a more appropriate icon.

fushicho_eien September 17 2009, 01:47:58 UTC

lol glad you like it :D

lol your icon makes me think of C/A :D YAYZERZ!!

cienna September 17 2009, 01:49:57 UTC

Yeah, this couple (Fai and Kurogane from Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle) really reminds me of them!

fushicho_eien September 17 2009, 02:36:06 UTC

na!! *runs off and bookmarks for reading later*

I just love them though.. Caius is so.. silly! I mean Kouje almost knocks the shit out of him and he's all "that was wonderous!" (I dont remember the exact quote and cant be bothered looking it up right now, but you get the point :D

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