separate and ever deadly (part ii)

[futurebruises]

pairing: het!luchen
rating: nc-17 for sexual scenes, underage drug usage, swearing
genre: high school au, drama??? angst?? fluff?
length: 12.7k words (!!!)
summary: rich teenage assholes fall painfully out of lust and into love. the second of many fics from the same fancy high school au as my mistakes were made for you.
note on genderbent character

Comments

[tripmee]

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oh my god i am legit crying right now and i haven't even started classes this morning and my roommate thinks i'm insane but but but

SCREAMSSSSSSSSSS your writing is so beautiful dear lord i just can't

i really loved how you brought across the dynamics of li hua and jongdae's relationship, and their individual characterization was so good too! personally i'm a hopeless romantic so i was kinda secretly hoping from the beginning that things would get better for them, and then there was all the +++++++ shitload of drama and bitchslapping and physical/psychological hurt and alksdha;lsdh;ahd everything just tapered off (??? my vocab is terrible) beautifully?

Seventeen-year-old Kim Jongdae’s got his designer jeans around his ankles and a pretty Chinese girl’s lips on his skinny cock and shit, he hopes his dad’s coworkers are getting an earload of this as sultry, showy moans fall off of his lips and Li Hua bats her eyelashes up at him.the juxtaposition of the opening had me hooked from the start. seriously the

[futurebruises]

omg omg thanks so much :') i appreciate it like crazy
AND YEAH TAOHUN IS COMING DOWN THE TRACKS AT TOP SPEED or something like that
i just finished the bulk of my exams and i have less than a month before i leave for the whole summer so i'm trying :*

[keyopqa]

I love this AU
Everyone is so real like your characterizations are so gOOD and real and believable (I read the xiulay one UGh perf) I don't wanna leave a long comment so I'm keep it short!!

Hey also will there be more??? And who is your co author??

[futurebruises]

thank you so much!!! i'm so glad you like it ^-^
and there will be more eventually! i started a taohun in the same au but it's pretty much on hiatus until i finish applying to college or until i get some time off. canachinrea is my coauthor, and she's working on the other three pairings but we're in about the same boat school-wise, so probably look forward to more sometime around december!

[bulba_chan]

sobs this was so deep?? and angsty and saddening (and trust me i don't usually read these kinds of fics bc i get upset really easily) but it was really well written ;; the bouncing back and forth between point of views made me just super sad and my heart clench and :c

also i just finished learning about drugs in psychology and how much they mess people up and then i read this and go NoOOO T__T

but yeah tq for great fic and sorry for bad comment omg

[theshadowsdance]

wow
this is so intense and amazing. it's very well written. it got me hooked since the beginning and i kept wanting to read
i love everything about this, it's depressing and kinda sad and deep, and i really appreciate how you're able to make me believe that whatever li hua or jongdae feels about themselves and about each other are real

definitely one of my favorite luchen fics

Jongdae doesn’t like sports much, but he likes short skirts and Li Hua and this practice features both of those in high concentrations.
LMAO

[futurebruises]

thank you!! orz sorry for the late reply but i really appreciate it. it was such a labor of love (and angst and misery but still!) so thanks a bunch!