No comma after Again's 'man', or change to 'his;' periods go inside quotation marks (i.e. "Never again"). Space between 'every' and 'day', unless it was a clever word play. But of course, that's the one I like best of the three (-> rude crutch called 'aid,' 'his body's poisoned soil').
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But of course, that's the one I like best of the three (-> rude crutch called 'aid,' 'his body's poisoned soil').
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