One-shot: No Going Back (Bella POV, E/B)

Dec 25, 2008 14:27

Title: No Going Back
Author: fuzzyluvbanana
Characters/Pairing: Bella POV, E/B
Rating: G
Category: Angst, interspersed with moments of quiet adoration
Spoilers: Um, none really unless you haven’t read Twilight
Summary: One-shot--Bella’s thoughts on the frantic drive from her house to the Cullen’s before they disperse to take care of James and Victoria.

No Going Back )

fanfiction: twilight: no going back

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ohfiyera December 26 2008, 00:56:12 UTC
omg bb! this was incredible!
you captured the essence of B/E and the devotion she feels towards him so perfectly! This has definitely made my family hell earlier in the day so much less annoying.

ILYSFM!

This was just friggen brilliant, mmkay? omg. wow. ily.

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fuzzyluvbanana December 26 2008, 05:32:28 UTC
well I only hoped you'd like it since I was too cheap to buy you an actual gift..lol!

you inspire me to write! srsly.

ily, bb! thanks for being so great to me. I'm really glad I've been blessed w/ friends like you! *hugs*

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thalia_csiny December 26 2008, 04:24:17 UTC
Very well-done! :D You captured all the characters very well.. It fits perfectly with the canon story. Bravo!

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fuzzyluvbanana December 26 2008, 05:30:26 UTC
omg! thank you so much! i super, super appreciate it :) :) :)

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bre2004 January 7 2009, 05:31:52 UTC
Okay, okay, okay... I have to say something (and that fucking glass is still rattling. A smart person would move it... *refer to other replies if you have no idea what I'm talking about, lol*) and that is, I wish they had kept the kiss in the movie, just that moment frozen for them, because I think Rob would have nailed that angsty pain - that damn Edward emotion x1000 - perfectly. I love that you blended the elements of both the book and the movie because I liked that they brought in that "normal" moment for Bella in the movie, as well as the moments between Edward and Bella because really, the movie had to skim through so much as far as their relationship, so kudos for that ( ... )

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fuzzyluvbanana January 7 2009, 16:51:21 UTC
And this, dear one, is why I needed your review. LOL! This whole entire thing just put the hugest grin on my face! You have this view on things that totally resembles my own and that's why we is Twicrack Sistahs.

You rock hardcore. Thank you, bb!

This specific fic isn't going to be expanded upon...I just wrote this as a oneshot.

The other fic I was talking about revolves more around an OC and Nessie...I have parts of it outlined but I haven't actually started writing it yet. It's tenatively titled 'The Necklace'...but I think I will keep that title.

Currently, tho, I am working on a fic based around The Host (I'm utterly insane for doing this) because I had the idea the other night and I started it and now I'm kinda obsessed about it...so yes, much writing to be done.

*goes to reply to your other comments*

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bre2004 January 13 2009, 07:02:20 UTC
I just love you.

And ooooh! Nessie, eh? I would love to se how that turns out, I find that I'm having one hell of a hard time trying to do the canon fics. I just... can't. So now I'm writing emo AH Bella. *lol* I'm feeling very blue lately, I guess. With pep.

What?! The Host fanfiction? Holy crow. What is this fic? I have to read the book again before I can read it, SOB!

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fuzzyluvbanana January 14 2009, 03:17:32 UTC
Yes, Nessie. I'm really excited about the fic but every time I sit down to actually try and start it I get overwhelmed and just stare longingly at the computer. *le sigh*

How can you be "blue" with "pep"? I think that's like an oxymoron or something. But with you, I somehow guess its possible.

And yes, I actually started a fic based around The Host. If you really want all the details I'll give em to ya...but its hardly canon enough that you'd need to go back and read the entire book again. I'm having this very strong urge to reread Twilight for some reason....or possibly New Moon.

Idk. *hugs* I'm off to respond to the rest of your comment spams, which I adore.

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