Fic: GAMBLE (part 2/?)

[fyrathilwen]

Title: Gamble
Chapter: 2
Author: Fyra (fyrathilwen)
Beta-reader: Debbi-chan (deborahs_melody)
Summary: Marui starts his action. What is his opinion about the new girl?

Comments

[deborahs_melody]

You know how much I enjoy reading your fic...like I've said I love the OC and you know...some of the words you use I haven't heard of (but they do exist lolz) I should read more words from the dictionary ^^;
I don't think I said this in the first chapter, but I'm really happy and honoured that you asked me to be your beta reader so thank you ^^
And don't give up on your writing!!!!!!!
xxx

[fyrathilwen]

I am glad that you enjoy it *___*. Wandering around on FF.net, I just realized how many have problems with the OCs... I'm wondering if my OC is a really original character XD. I started being nervous about it *thrills*.

And... aw, this is the biggest compliment I can get from you <3. It's relaxing to know that you don't mind editing it, and... don't thank me, I should be the thankful one *___*.

I won't give up ever XD. You can be sure about it :D.

[bloatedspinach]

XD This is really hilarious. Poor slop..er.. ant colony. They got killed. Either the slop or Marui killed them. Keep up the great work!

[fyrathilwen]

Yeah, Yanagi is quite scary freaking out his teammates like that... I am sure Marui will be careful from now on with the guy XD.

Thank you for your comment! I hope you will enjoy the next chaps as well!