Fic: A LITTLE PAIN

Jun 28, 2007 10:47

Title: A little pain
Author: Fyra (fyrathilwen)
Word count: 813
Rating: *clueless*
Genre: angst...
Pairing: Fuji x Tezuka
Summary: Fuji's life has definitely changed since he met Tezuka.
A/N: non-beta-read; mistakes can show up.
Warnings: spoiler! Hints of Fuji's first singles match in the national tournament.

I have never wanted to know how it feels. )

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rageboxalice June 28 2007, 09:29:44 UTC
Well, the grammar's a little... iffy at points, but the ending is really good. Very nice take on their relationship and Fuji's mind.

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fyrathilwen June 28 2007, 09:54:37 UTC
Sorry for the grammar >.<

[ I know it isn't a good excuse, but my dearest beta-reader is spending her holiday now XD ]

And thank you for the comment *-*.

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hibimaosuki June 28 2007, 09:31:31 UTC
That's... Um...

Wow.

(Er, a little correction of sorts: "I can’t be nor another Tezuka neither a new Echizen." <-- Neither-nor and not nor-neither. ^^;)

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fyrathilwen June 28 2007, 09:56:49 UTC
Thank you for pointing it out, corrected <3.

Thank you for the reading as well XD.

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hibimaosuki June 28 2007, 11:39:40 UTC
Oh, and I also forgot to mention. Either "can't... either-or" or "can... neither-nor". ^^;

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fyrathilwen June 28 2007, 15:28:34 UTC
Yeah... *fails oh-so-badly* XD.

Thank you again ^^;;.

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