my first TEGOPI fanfic !!!

[fyxyse_chan]

Title: Unmei (Destiny)
Pairing: TEGOPI
Genre: Romance
Chapter: 1 (1/?)
Summary: Unexpected meeting brings two souls together

This is my first attempt. so please don't go harsh on me. i'm still learning. feel free to leave a comment. i like getting comment   =)

Chapter 1

“Yabai! I’m late.” Tegoshi muttered to himself.

Running as fast as he could, he didn’

Comments

[kairibean]

^o^ ~ Can't wait to see what happens next!
This is really good for your first attempt ne ~ ^^ -claps-
Please post another chapter soon! ♥ ~

[fyxyse_chan]

arigato...u r very kind =)

probably have to wait for a while for next chap. i'm quite busy rite now =(

[kairibean]

Ahh ~ that's okay :D
I can wait ^^ Haha
I rather read something really good that takes a while, rather than a rushed job that may not be as good. xD
So, don't worry ^^ take your time! ♥

[cess_chan]

wheeee....I immediately clicked the link after seeing the word TEGOPI. lol.I haven't even read the other stuff posted in news_jpop *wicked*

this is a nice start... Can't wait to rad what happens next ^___^

[fyxyse_chan]

thank u =)

i'm always like that too. i'll feel very excited once i see the word "TEGOPI" posted in news_jpop XD

[lockthememories]

good start! i love tegopi^.^
gambatte yo i'll be waiting for chap 2!:D

[win03die]

tegopi is <3<3

very nice start. hope this'll become fluffy and cute, with some drama of course.

[fyxyse_chan]

erm...i'll try my best =) thank u for your comment

[uchihi]

"Eeto…cute boy, are you ok?"

hahaha Pi already teasing Tego on his first meeting?^^

moreover, smart Tego for being so weak in front of Pi^^

[fyxyse_chan]

i like the whole idea of tegoshi being kind of weak n then saved by yamapi. i think it is just sooo sweet XD

thank u for your comment